for Torn2/9 c39 anilah
I love this story. I just find myself not able to get over the fact that these adopted and biological children, who are siblings for all intents and purposes, are couples.
I love this story. I just find myself not able to get over the fact that these adopted and biological children, who are siblings for all intents and purposes, are couples.
1/7 c94 
2Myemotionsdarling
I've literally made an ffnet account so that I can comment on this incredible story. Your writing and story telling is magnificent, and I have read every single word of Torn in about 3 days (thanks for ruining my sleep lol ;)) I really hope that you continue with Torn, it is literally all I can currently think about haha! Although we all obviously under stand that RL is a bitch, and gets in the way :) And, happy 2025! 3
2MyemotionsdarlingI've literally made an ffnet account so that I can comment on this incredible story. Your writing and story telling is magnificent, and I have read every single word of Torn in about 3 days (thanks for ruining my sleep lol ;)) I really hope that you continue with Torn, it is literally all I can currently think about haha! Although we all obviously under stand that RL is a bitch, and gets in the way :) And, happy 2025! 3
11/28/2024 c94 Guest
J'aime beaucoup ta fanfiction... dommage qu'elle soit abandonnée
J'aime beaucoup ta fanfiction... dommage qu'elle soit abandonnée
11/18/2024 c94 EndlessGloaming
Wow, what a ride it's been. I'd love to see the resolution of this story, but even if not, thank you for what you've shared so far.
Wow, what a ride it's been. I'd love to see the resolution of this story, but even if not, thank you for what you've shared so far.
11/17/2024 c90 EndlessGloaming
Wow, that's some generational trauma along with a reveal that was well set up.
This story has been so intense in so many ways I've hardly wanted to put it down. I never thought a 650k story could feel so short!
Wow, that's some generational trauma along with a reveal that was well set up.
This story has been so intense in so many ways I've hardly wanted to put it down. I never thought a 650k story could feel so short!
11/15/2024 c49 EndlessGloaming
That was such a powerful chapter. Though my past isn't nearly as horrific as Bella's, that first session especially reminded me of a lot of what I've worked through in therapy. This whole story so far has been such a beautiful example of loving restorative care. I don't know where all this came from in your life, but thank you for sharing it.
That was such a powerful chapter. Though my past isn't nearly as horrific as Bella's, that first session especially reminded me of a lot of what I've worked through in therapy. This whole story so far has been such a beautiful example of loving restorative care. I don't know where all this came from in your life, but thank you for sharing it.
11/13/2024 c94 2flubbles
And I’m up to date. Hope all is good with you Dooba. Thanks for the story. X
2flubblesAnd I’m up to date. Hope all is good with you Dooba. Thanks for the story. X
11/13/2024 c89 flubbles
Oh my god! Do you know how long I have waited for Bella to give Carlisle a hug! That poor man! This melted my heart.
Thank you!
Oh my god! Do you know how long I have waited for Bella to give Carlisle a hug! That poor man! This melted my heart.
Thank you!
11/13/2024 c80 flubbles
I love how even in the dark places you still put in the odd line of dialogue that makes me chuckle.
Things like the exchange between Bella and Emmett whilst doing the crossword and Bella's comment that she doesn't deal with stuff, when talking to Edward.
I am genuinely in awe of the fact that you have written this story over so many years (not a criticism) and you haven't lost the feel of the story and the characters still feel so true to themselves.
I'm aware that I only have 14 chapters left and I don't know how resolved this story will be, but please know that I will wait for this story to be finished, if you're ever able to.
I know people asking can put pressure on writing and suck the fun out of just sitting down and putting pen to paper so to speak. There is always so much excitement when you post the first chapter of a fic - will people read it, what will they think. Then it gains traction and the next thing you know you have an audience and perceived pressure and expectations.
I hope all is well with you. x
I love how even in the dark places you still put in the odd line of dialogue that makes me chuckle.
Things like the exchange between Bella and Emmett whilst doing the crossword and Bella's comment that she doesn't deal with stuff, when talking to Edward.
I am genuinely in awe of the fact that you have written this story over so many years (not a criticism) and you haven't lost the feel of the story and the characters still feel so true to themselves.
I'm aware that I only have 14 chapters left and I don't know how resolved this story will be, but please know that I will wait for this story to be finished, if you're ever able to.
I know people asking can put pressure on writing and suck the fun out of just sitting down and putting pen to paper so to speak. There is always so much excitement when you post the first chapter of a fic - will people read it, what will they think. Then it gains traction and the next thing you know you have an audience and perceived pressure and expectations.
I hope all is well with you. x
11/11/2024 c41 flubbles
Your writing is exceptional. Considering she gives herself so few words to work with, Bella few exchanges are always heartbreaking.
It was a few chapters back, but I loved when Bella kept the post-it note Carlisle gave her, for her Gym detention essay.
I have read so many chapters in a row and not left you any reviews which I feel truly awful about. I'm not sure if you are even still reading reviews.
I took a look through your favourites and was so surprised to see that my fic was there! I also see that you actually read it back in the day and left me a number of reviews. Thank you so much!
I am devouring this fic, but I'm also conscious that once I finish it all, then there'll be a hole, which I'll have to try and fill with another fic. I am loving Bella's progression and you have written possibly the sweetest Edward.
Thank you
Your writing is exceptional. Considering she gives herself so few words to work with, Bella few exchanges are always heartbreaking.
It was a few chapters back, but I loved when Bella kept the post-it note Carlisle gave her, for her Gym detention essay.
I have read so many chapters in a row and not left you any reviews which I feel truly awful about. I'm not sure if you are even still reading reviews.
I took a look through your favourites and was so surprised to see that my fic was there! I also see that you actually read it back in the day and left me a number of reviews. Thank you so much!
I am devouring this fic, but I'm also conscious that once I finish it all, then there'll be a hole, which I'll have to try and fill with another fic. I am loving Bella's progression and you have written possibly the sweetest Edward.
Thank you
10/26/2024 c94 Guest
Is there any chance we could have an update from you️
Is there any chance we could have an update from you️
9/26/2024 c94 1Ashleydaabest2
Here I am again - having re-read the entire story again through out the days and nights, and still loving every bit of it. No words to do it justice. It moves me to tears, and feel all the emotions of Bella and the entire journey throughout.
I also cannot fathom that this story was first published in 2010 and I have been following since. I always remember it and go back to it and times.
I hope it will be finished and updated though I feel even "an end" would still be just the beginning as every story is ;D This story could easily be published (with change of names of course A.K.A: the twilight reference) and turned into a series or movie one day. I could see it happening as I know another Twilight Fanfiction that got published into their very own book with changing the character names, but entirely original story as yours is entirely original and unique of its own.
Anything's possible. Hope life is treating you well Dooba - so much time has past since the last update and I know so much has happened in my life since then too. Lots of downs and ups and new memories. Here's to making new one's with best still yet to be.
1Ashleydaabest2Here I am again - having re-read the entire story again through out the days and nights, and still loving every bit of it. No words to do it justice. It moves me to tears, and feel all the emotions of Bella and the entire journey throughout.
I also cannot fathom that this story was first published in 2010 and I have been following since. I always remember it and go back to it and times.
I hope it will be finished and updated though I feel even "an end" would still be just the beginning as every story is ;D This story could easily be published (with change of names of course A.K.A: the twilight reference) and turned into a series or movie one day. I could see it happening as I know another Twilight Fanfiction that got published into their very own book with changing the character names, but entirely original story as yours is entirely original and unique of its own.
Anything's possible. Hope life is treating you well Dooba - so much time has past since the last update and I know so much has happened in my life since then too. Lots of downs and ups and new memories. Here's to making new one's with best still yet to be.
9/3/2024 c94 Guest
Please, pkease, please, don’t prove I’m right
Please, pkease, please, don’t prove I’m right
8/4/2024 c94 Guest
Tu historia es increíble.
Ojalá pudieras continuarla y tener un desenlace de esta espectacular historia.
Tu historia es increíble.
Ojalá pudieras continuarla y tener un desenlace de esta espectacular historia.