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9/30/2010 c2 3lozzy035
poor bella everything reminding her of bad times

wow she really cant be touched why not

update soon
9/30/2010 c2 1dat panda bandit
this is so amazing!
9/30/2010 c2 UnoriginalThoughts
I thought this chapter was well written. I know you were concerned about 'getting into Bella's head' but it all fits with what you have written so far.

The relationship between Bella and Renee is well portrayed and interaction between other characters is good and it'll be interesting to see how it progresses.

Will be waiting patiently (or not so!) for the next chapter.
9/27/2010 c1 2Rondnoir96
I like where this has started.
9/27/2010 c1 3lozzy035
poor bella having that happen to her twice

update soon
9/27/2010 c1 Kiss007
amazing start to a story! Please continue
9/27/2010 c1 2Lizzosaur
I think you should continue.
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