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10/4/2013 c10 33anjumstar
Okay, the ending was strange and rather abrupt, but I still kinda liked it. This last chapter was especially cute. Was this story at all inspired by RENT? Because it seemed like Glee meets RENT to me. Anyway, my biggest critique would be that you often give someone dialogue and then give someone else actions on the same line. It's very confusing and hard to follow! Just a little formatting issue that sort of drove me crazy.

This was a very interesting story. Short, but rather good. Though I didn't understand Jesse and Jessica's relationship. It just seemed as though you wrote her so that she and Jesse wouldn't make sense together so we wouldn't feel bad when they broke up. It sounded like they didn't even like each other at all, though.
9/29/2013 c10 2Ms.allea
This story is original (I think that's one of the few were Rachel has an addiction problem after high school) and so well writtten. I love it.
5/19/2012 c10 luisemau
very good, felt so happy after reading it!
4/7/2012 c1 1Some Enchanted Sunset
I was just creeping through St. Berry fics late at night, as one does, and I stumbled upon this. Normally, I'm more of a one-shot person, but I was intrigued. So I sat down and read it. And I adored it. It was so sweet and at the same time, so tragic and heartbreaking. Probably one of the best AU St. Berry fics I've ever read.
9/5/2011 c10 8kitty-is-a-dreamer
Since I have made a promise to myself to treat writers as I would like to be treated ie. Always review stories when I have time I guess i'll start with this one! Wow... That really sums it up. This was an amazing heartfelt story and I loved the plot but I felt the epilogue was a bit lacking in answers I mean did jesse give up performing for good? But overall I loved everything including your talented style of writing! This story is definetly going on my favourites!
8/29/2011 c10 25auhaes23
This story is just amazing !
11/22/2010 c10 11Eomyn
I'm sorry to say it, but I didn't feel that your original ending was one. I have nothing against open-ending but curiously I felt bad about this one. It was the one spot I didn't love in the entire story. I never thought I would enjoy a St.Berry story so much! I guess it's also because they start from scratch, she doesn't choose him over Finn or something.

This is like the fifth story from you I read, and I still love it as much as ever. If I didn't have to be somewhere in an hour I would definitely continue reading...
11/11/2010 c10 14AllisonSwan
loved it!
11/11/2010 c9 AllisonSwan
loved it!
11/7/2010 c6 1MissElliexXxXx
I always listen to broken strings by james morrison while Reading this and have no idea why only half the lyrics work but it's still perfect wtf amazing story btw write another one with broken rachel please?
10/20/2010 c10 28onemilliongoldstars
Aw! So sweet. I was slightly worried at the end of chapter 9 but it was so nice, is there going to be a sequel? I hope so! This has made up for the hit my Jesseness has taken now that he's not on the show (at the moment anyway) :) Great job xxxx

Ray
10/18/2010 c10 10AmyLeigh88
I wanted to review your last few chapters, but this is the first time that I've actually had time to write one. :) I just wanted to tell you how much I loved the story and the way you ended it. I had hoped that you would have Rachel really want to beat her addiction and I'm glad that you had Jesse (and Jake) help her. Loved her homecoming and that Jesse was with her for that as well. And the St. Berry baby at the end? Perfection.

I hope you write more St. Berry fic in the future.
10/17/2010 c10 smiles
Aww... the perfect end to a perfect story! Loved it!
10/17/2010 c10 13RubberSoulRevolver
perfect way to tie it all up! I hope we get to read some other st.berry story this was amazing :) You are awesome
10/17/2010 c10 3kbraven52
Thank you so much for writing the epilogue! Loved it!

I hope to read more st.berry from you soon :)
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