
9/30/2017 c3 Netchka
Great story so far. Really looking forward to finding out what happens next. Tony and Cat seem to be getting along already.
Great story so far. Really looking forward to finding out what happens next. Tony and Cat seem to be getting along already.
11/16/2010 c3
5IndiAcidSnake
*cracks knuckles* Chip, its ass kicking time.
and...OH MY GOD! GIBBY! U WROTE A NEW STORY! WHOOOO! :D
loved it and cnt wait for more!
Love NCISchick xoxoox
p.s...soz it took so long to read it, it never came up in my alerts!

*cracks knuckles* Chip, its ass kicking time.
and...OH MY GOD! GIBBY! U WROTE A NEW STORY! WHOOOO! :D
loved it and cnt wait for more!
Love NCISchick xoxoox
p.s...soz it took so long to read it, it never came up in my alerts!
10/12/2010 c3
9I am the girl in the corner
this was very good, i can't wait to see what happens are you going to include frame up in the story or...? anyway great job keep up the good work :D :D :D

this was very good, i can't wait to see what happens are you going to include frame up in the story or...? anyway great job keep up the good work :D :D :D
10/12/2010 c3
2MuseUrania
Love this chapter, I can see all the characters and you did an excellent job with t he team's intereactions. :) And have fun with your creative license. ;) Ah, I've never seen jest used in place of gist before...

Love this chapter, I can see all the characters and you did an excellent job with t he team's intereactions. :) And have fun with your creative license. ;) Ah, I've never seen jest used in place of gist before...
10/11/2010 c3
14bethchilds34
luv luv luv luv! i was on the fone with my friend when u sent that text and then i thought i wouldnt b frst. if im not, someone might die... jk. but they will b injured. great job on this and keep it up! cannot wait for chapter 4!

luv luv luv luv! i was on the fone with my friend when u sent that text and then i thought i wouldnt b frst. if im not, someone might die... jk. but they will b injured. great job on this and keep it up! cannot wait for chapter 4!
10/8/2010 c2
9I am the girl in the corner
wow, nice work. i love it. looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the good work. :D :D :D :D

wow, nice work. i love it. looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the good work. :D :D :D :D
10/8/2010 c2
2MuseUrania
All right, so this is looking to be a very interesting story, despite being another 'Tony finds out he has a child' plot. G Ah, you referred to him as her at the end. Don't worry about it, I do that too sometimes when typing too fast. Mind gets ahead of hand... heh

All right, so this is looking to be a very interesting story, despite being another 'Tony finds out he has a child' plot. G Ah, you referred to him as her at the end. Don't worry about it, I do that too sometimes when typing too fast. Mind gets ahead of hand... heh
10/8/2010 c2 zats
The last sentence made me think that Tony already knew he had a daughter. Hope to find out more soon!
The last sentence made me think that Tony already knew he had a daughter. Hope to find out more soon!