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6/20/2017 c1 Guest
Very cute and sweet. I enjoyed it!

Side note, the last bit of french should be "Je t'aime". Minor apostrophe misplacement
10/27/2014 c1 Guest
The French is good, but you put the apostrophe in the wrong place, I believe.
It's "Je t'aime."
So honestly just a small little typo. :33
*after saying what needed saying melts from how adorable that was*
8/7/2013 c1 Guest
Awwww, TOO CUTE!
3/17/2011 c1 4Rosebud1296
she sneezed XD, i wasn't expecting that, i love it
1/25/2011 c1 113XxSoulNoteWriterxX
Awwiee! I love it! X3 You should write more stories like this ;)
1/10/2011 c1 end28
Nice and cute:D
12/13/2010 c1 3The Illustrious Tama
Minor issue with the french: the apostrophe was placed in the wrong place. Je t'aime, instead of Je ta'ime. Thats all.

In any case, very cute!
11/23/2010 c1 3Onigami Link
;3; This story is so cute it gave me gooseskin.
10/2/2010 c1 17Lupus Silvae
D'awww! :D I was listening to Waka's flute song from the soundtrack when I was reading this, and I swear, I nearly died from the cuteness.

You write incredibly well, and I wouldn't know about your French, as the only French I know is what I learned from Waka. XD Which is sort of depressing, really.

Anyhow, great job!

~Wolf~
9/27/2010 c1 13mochi2isluv
Yay, an AmmyXWaka fic at last! Very good, but I don't speak French either (I wish I did, just so I can write more French into Waka's speech) so I can't help you there. Very sweet one-shot.

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