for UnEven9/28/2010 c1 
9Iwant2sparkle
You, of course, know how I feel about this one-shot. It was fantastic and you did a fabulous job. You certainly deserved the recognition you received in the contest. : )
9Iwant2sparkleYou, of course, know how I feel about this one-shot. It was fantastic and you did a fabulous job. You certainly deserved the recognition you received in the contest. : )
9/28/2010 c1 saltire884
That was so good and such a unique way to do a chapter before. I've never seen that style used before but it really did fit. Your short sentences cut through all the BS and get to the point of the subject and let you know exactly what was happening and what he was feeling without getting lost in all the extra words.
I REALLY like it.
That was so good and such a unique way to do a chapter before. I've never seen that style used before but it really did fit. Your short sentences cut through all the BS and get to the point of the subject and let you know exactly what was happening and what he was feeling without getting lost in all the extra words.
I REALLY like it.