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1/6/2018 c1 2k+Hawki
Mixed on this. It’s notable that the list of songs, the disclaimer, and the quote take up a significant portion of the story, and as they all use the same font without any linebreaks, they kind of mesh together. Even in the writing itself, it possesses capitalization errors (earth should be Earth, Moon crystal should be Moon Crystal, etc.) The use of “fucked up” also feels really out of place.

I like the idea behind this, and it does carry emotional weight, but it also feels like it was written in a rush.
3/3/2013 c1 17Julius Night
Very awesome work, short and sweet, yet quite deep, liked it!
10/8/2010 c1 5Death Rebirth Senshi
That was cool! I love that you capture the thought behind Cosmos' decision to go back in time!

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