for Yours3/22/2021 c1 Brooke Sabens Guenther
Absolutely amazing. Love where you were going with this story. So much more to tell. Crying my eyes out. Beautifully written.
Absolutely amazing. Love where you were going with this story. So much more to tell. Crying my eyes out. Beautifully written.
4/29/2015 c1 Guest
oh thank goodness you brought him home safely.
beautiful short story.
oh thank goodness you brought him home safely.
beautiful short story.
7/25/2011 c1 
14Margaretlucylu
omg
this soooooooooo needs a continuation, cant tell you the number of tears i am wiping off my face
14Margaretlucyluomg
this soooooooooo needs a continuation, cant tell you the number of tears i am wiping off my face
12/5/2010 c1 2Dikent
Great job! Love it. Him holding her and telling her back that he loved her tooo, sweet.. More?
2DikentGreat job! Love it. Him holding her and telling her back that he loved her tooo, sweet.. More?
10/2/2010 c1 time4tea
I could feel the pain and anguish in this story and was so relieved to read the final line.
I could feel the pain and anguish in this story and was so relieved to read the final line.
10/1/2010 c1 3RachDvn
I just love how the ending is ambiguous, left to reader interpretation. Beautiful one shot. ~Rach
3RachDvnI just love how the ending is ambiguous, left to reader interpretation. Beautiful one shot. ~Rach
10/1/2010 c1 2Emilie Martel and RE Nobert
Ok , I'm sitting on a bus with 50 other people trying to hide my tears and sobs any my nose is running. It's really very embarassing.
Beautifully done. I'm hoping there will be more.
2Emilie Martel and RE NobertOk , I'm sitting on a bus with 50 other people trying to hide my tears and sobs any my nose is running. It's really very embarassing.
Beautifully done. I'm hoping there will be more.