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9/30/2010 c1 ChiseHatori
OoooOOoooo ! Very creative way to re-make this story. You did really well with young Allen's feelings that he would have felt at the time too. Also, Loved the last 2 ending paragraphs! Very nice job!
9/30/2010 c1 z
his left arm is the weapon, not his right.
9/30/2010 c1 Inkling
One helluva breath-taking one-shot. That's all I can say on 11PM on a Thursday night.

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9/30/2010 c1 12animephoenix2468
Woah. Your writing is amazing, especially the way you combined details and imagery with Allen's emotions as he narrated with his comments and occasional stutters. This one-shot blew me away.

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