for Alternative Arrangements10/2/2010 c1 dlhk
Excellent. I really enjoyed this even though I typically don't like to think of Edward with anyone but Bella. I'm glad he didn't cheat once they were actually married. Great job. -mommyofboth
Excellent. I really enjoyed this even though I typically don't like to think of Edward with anyone but Bella. I'm glad he didn't cheat once they were actually married. Great job. -mommyofboth
10/2/2010 c1 pixiekat7
Lovely, simply lovely.
Oh & Tanya is such an evil wench *winks* I'm thrilled that Edward decided that Bella was more.
Lovely, simply lovely.
Oh & Tanya is such an evil wench *winks* I'm thrilled that Edward decided that Bella was more.
10/2/2010 c1 CindyWindy
Anything you pen is a must-read! This was amazingly different from your other stories. I loved the slow progression and soft warmth of their relationship. Many thanks!
Anything you pen is a must-read! This was amazingly different from your other stories. I loved the slow progression and soft warmth of their relationship. Many thanks!
10/2/2010 c1 
5Juze
I really liked the concept of this story. It seemed to be much too complicated for a OS, though. I think if you were to stretch it out, it would make for a very nice read. Good job!
5JuzeI really liked the concept of this story. It seemed to be much too complicated for a OS, though. I think if you were to stretch it out, it would make for a very nice read. Good job!
10/2/2010 c1 16Chicklette
*sigh*
this was lovely. I expected nothing less, but really, it was just lovely.
thank you so much. *hearts*
16Chicklette*sigh*
this was lovely. I expected nothing less, but really, it was just lovely.
thank you so much. *hearts*
10/2/2010 c1 1Wannabe Charlotte
Wow! Really nice! Sort of reminds me of the movie Lady Jane with Helena Bonham Carter and Cary Elwes.
I like the dialogue - it sounds very natural and flows well.
My only criticism is that I would have liked more - more of the story, more character development, just - more.
1Wannabe CharlotteWow! Really nice! Sort of reminds me of the movie Lady Jane with Helena Bonham Carter and Cary Elwes.
I like the dialogue - it sounds very natural and flows well.
My only criticism is that I would have liked more - more of the story, more character development, just - more.
10/2/2010 c1 4miaokuancha
This is lovely! Recc'd by Chicklette on twitter. So glad I came to take a look!
4miaokuanchaThis is lovely! Recc'd by Chicklette on twitter. So glad I came to take a look!
10/2/2010 c1 2Dollybigmomma
This would make a wonderful full length story! I do hope you will consider it at some point. Stories from this era are so much fun to read. Well done!
2DollybigmommaThis would make a wonderful full length story! I do hope you will consider it at some point. Stories from this era are so much fun to read. Well done!