for A Way Through The Darkness2/23/2017 c18 grishy
I'm reading this verse backwards, the second story first, then this one and now starting with the last one, but I kind of like that way.
I'm reading this verse backwards, the second story first, then this one and now starting with the last one, but I kind of like that way.
3/22/2016 c18 
3PastOneonta
This was very good. I know you wrote it a long time ago and I don't think you are still writing but I wanted to comment. I thought the story was good, Neal and Peter were excellent. Their relationship was very well written. Neal's pain and memory loss was moving. We were glad to see the end where the bad guys are put away and Neal can get better in his home at June's. Thanks for writing.
3PastOneontaThis was very good. I know you wrote it a long time ago and I don't think you are still writing but I wanted to comment. I thought the story was good, Neal and Peter were excellent. Their relationship was very well written. Neal's pain and memory loss was moving. We were glad to see the end where the bad guys are put away and Neal can get better in his home at June's. Thanks for writing.
3/31/2015 c18 Scarym
I came across your story this afternoon & I read it all in one sitting. I really enjoyed the Neal whumping and that Peter & El were there to help him recover.
What I like the best about your story was how you wrote the complicated friendship between Neal & Peter. I liked that even thought at the beginning when Neal didn't remember Peter he still felt that he could trust him.
I just saw that you wrote a sequel so now I have to go and read that.
Thanks for a great story. :)
I came across your story this afternoon & I read it all in one sitting. I really enjoyed the Neal whumping and that Peter & El were there to help him recover.
What I like the best about your story was how you wrote the complicated friendship between Neal & Peter. I liked that even thought at the beginning when Neal didn't remember Peter he still felt that he could trust him.
I just saw that you wrote a sequel so now I have to go and read that.
Thanks for a great story. :)
12/31/2012 c18 27Meyli Vaisyl
I just love this story! So much whump in the same sorry is sadistic but I can't help but love it :)
Happy New Year!
Meÿli.
27Meyli VaisylI just love this story! So much whump in the same sorry is sadistic but I can't help but love it :)
Happy New Year!
Meÿli.
11/27/2012 c18 23AssassinsQueen
I have to admit... putting Neal into danger 3 times within a story and having him hurt badly enough to take him back to the hospital is kinda cruel... BUT: I am glad that he'd gonna be okay in the end and back to his old self :)
You did a great on this story :) was really fun to read this, I hope I do as well on my own WC fanfic that I'm currently writing. ;)
23AssassinsQueenI have to admit... putting Neal into danger 3 times within a story and having him hurt badly enough to take him back to the hospital is kinda cruel... BUT: I am glad that he'd gonna be okay in the end and back to his old self :)
You did a great on this story :) was really fun to read this, I hope I do as well on my own WC fanfic that I'm currently writing. ;)
11/27/2012 c13 AssassinsQueen
Neal's back to normal, isn't he? He seems to be back to his old self... at least as best as he can :)
Neal's back to normal, isn't he? He seems to be back to his old self... at least as best as he can :)
11/27/2012 c7 AssassinsQueen
awwww :) I always knew he's like family to them :) very nice and very sweet chapter :)
awwww :) I always knew he's like family to them :) very nice and very sweet chapter :)
11/27/2012 c5 AssassinsQueen
now that last scene was kinda sweet :) something I'd love to hear Neal say to him some day :)
very nice job so far :)
now that last scene was kinda sweet :) something I'd love to hear Neal say to him some day :)
very nice job so far :)
11/27/2012 c1 AssassinsQueen
ooohhhh, this sounds like it's getting really interesting :) looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
ooohhhh, this sounds like it's getting really interesting :) looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
10/9/2012 c9 wotumba1
so they found out where neal is staying... not a good sign...
glad that peter reacted fast to the threat
so they found out where neal is staying... not a good sign...
glad that peter reacted fast to the threat