for Daughter of Time11/12/2018 c1 Guest
It was okay? Not that great cause there are a lot of errors. It was going too quick, I felt it was a rush and not the smooth transition. The introduction was not subtle, just stating what she is and her name, and etc.
the story has potential though.
It was okay? Not that great cause there are a lot of errors. It was going too quick, I felt it was a rush and not the smooth transition. The introduction was not subtle, just stating what she is and her name, and etc.
the story has potential though.
9/26/2011 c4 
1TenIsTHEDoctor
Lol! So, I'm actually pretty ok with this ending. XD Yea, it was kind of quick but it was basically how I hoped it would turn out. Jack/Bella, she stands up to Doucheward, and then leaves with the Doctor and Rose. Aw yea. :)
xoxo Much Love, Britt
1TenIsTHEDoctorLol! So, I'm actually pretty ok with this ending. XD Yea, it was kind of quick but it was basically how I hoped it would turn out. Jack/Bella, she stands up to Doucheward, and then leaves with the Doctor and Rose. Aw yea. :)
xoxo Much Love, Britt
9/4/2011 c3 ahhhhh.okay
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I love Bella and Jack and this story! xD
I can't wait to see what you have planned! :D
UebjdjsgoHdi
I love Bella and Jack and this story! xD
I can't wait to see what you have planned! :D
7/6/2011 c3 1KarmaLovingFanfic
OMG THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING! I can't wait till you update, hope it is soon.
1KarmaLovingFanficOMG THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING! I can't wait till you update, hope it is soon.
5/9/2011 c3 Raenya
hmmm...interesting, i hope you update soon i really like this fic so far...is it gunna be bella/jack or bella/edward?
hmmm...interesting, i hope you update soon i really like this fic so far...is it gunna be bella/jack or bella/edward?