for When Will You Come Out?4/28/2021 c8 297699767660
aww i caught up! i'm loving all the NaruMai moments here, though poor Mai for having the ghost target her :(
i'm sad that this isn't being continued :( however if you ever plan to come back and update, i'll always be happy to read!
aww i caught up! i'm loving all the NaruMai moments here, though poor Mai for having the ghost target her :(
i'm sad that this isn't being continued :( however if you ever plan to come back and update, i'll always be happy to read!
8/6/2014 c3 Radioactivity.47
I love this already! It's moving at a paced rate, not to fast or slow, and has a brilliant topic. Not boring at all to me. You show each character pretty perfectly in my opinion, as well as having a ingenious idea of the case. I really can't say anything other than it's a splendid fan fiction!
Now that that's over... THIS IS SO FUNNY a possessed tea cup is hilarious never think I heard of that one before! The book is awesome!
I love this already! It's moving at a paced rate, not to fast or slow, and has a brilliant topic. Not boring at all to me. You show each character pretty perfectly in my opinion, as well as having a ingenious idea of the case. I really can't say anything other than it's a splendid fan fiction!
Now that that's over... THIS IS SO FUNNY a possessed tea cup is hilarious never think I heard of that one before! The book is awesome!
2/18/2014 c8 
4KhaalidaNyx
What now? It ends there?! What about the rest of the case?! I love this story! It is so nerve-racking and thrilling, with a touch of humor and romance between the characters!
4KhaalidaNyxWhat now? It ends there?! What about the rest of the case?! I love this story! It is so nerve-racking and thrilling, with a touch of humor and romance between the characters!
3/13/2013 c7 1Petale-de-Rose
Just wanted to say (since I'm reading this over again since I love it so much) thank you so, so much for being one of the biggest inspirations that led me to writing and newly posting my own Ghost Hunt story :) Thank you, thank you, thank you, you are truly amazing!
1Petale-de-RoseJust wanted to say (since I'm reading this over again since I love it so much) thank you so, so much for being one of the biggest inspirations that led me to writing and newly posting my own Ghost Hunt story :) Thank you, thank you, thank you, you are truly amazing!
3/1/2013 c8 Petale-de-Rose
I can't see myself living the rest of my life without reading more chapters of this fic! I will kill a kitten for every day you don't update!
I can't see myself living the rest of my life without reading more chapters of this fic! I will kill a kitten for every day you don't update!
11/16/2011 c8 2OnceaSuperWhoLockian
Such such such a good story! You're doing an amazing job, and this case is super creepy. I'm enjoying the dynamic you've got going on between the characters. They're all very well written. I really can't wait to read more so PLEASE update again soon!
~Jess
2OnceaSuperWhoLockianSuch such such a good story! You're doing an amazing job, and this case is super creepy. I'm enjoying the dynamic you've got going on between the characters. They're all very well written. I really can't wait to read more so PLEASE update again soon!
~Jess
12/9/2010 c8 1BloodyXan-Xan
Omg that was so scary poor mai i mean come on a hand really! That i truly did not see coming,loved it n hope u can update it soon
1BloodyXan-XanOmg that was so scary poor mai i mean come on a hand really! That i truly did not see coming,loved it n hope u can update it soon
12/9/2010 c8 1xSapphirexRosesxFanx
the message from Gene to Naru by Mai was totally funny, poor Naru now he knows not to get Mai mad that she would like to kick his ass, ah! wrong, she always want to, so he must be happy he got the others holding her back. ha! ha!
but...the bathroom thing, was totally creepy! poor Mai, i don't think she would like to move from her spot of the sofa, how is she going to tell Naru that she was using without noticing the hand as a soap? that was a life-travmatic expirience! she will also turn totally red as she always does, who would blame this time? i think also that Naru really need to talk to her and calm her more than she is showing that fake smile, she may put on a real when he sit down next to her but the rst i bet was f.a.k.e.! poor Mai. i think it's better to keep er near him, the ghost totally on her and she already have freaked out more than the other times of other cases, he would if he was in the same situation in the bath. i would!
please UPDATE really soon!
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please UPDATE really soon!
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please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
1xSapphirexRosesxFanxthe message from Gene to Naru by Mai was totally funny, poor Naru now he knows not to get Mai mad that she would like to kick his ass, ah! wrong, she always want to, so he must be happy he got the others holding her back. ha! ha!
but...the bathroom thing, was totally creepy! poor Mai, i don't think she would like to move from her spot of the sofa, how is she going to tell Naru that she was using without noticing the hand as a soap? that was a life-travmatic expirience! she will also turn totally red as she always does, who would blame this time? i think also that Naru really need to talk to her and calm her more than she is showing that fake smile, she may put on a real when he sit down next to her but the rst i bet was f.a.k.e.! poor Mai. i think it's better to keep er near him, the ghost totally on her and she already have freaked out more than the other times of other cases, he would if he was in the same situation in the bath. i would!
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
please UPDATE really soon!
;-)
12/8/2010 c8 2Oriax Ailaht
Ahhhhh! A severed hand I'll get nitemares tonite! Teehee! I hop le they will be able to solve the case soon enough
*PLZ PLZ UPDATE!*
2Oriax AilahtAhhhhh! A severed hand I'll get nitemares tonite! Teehee! I hop le they will be able to solve the case soon enough
*PLZ PLZ UPDATE!*
11/29/2010 c7 missyangel87
Like it and i wouldn't mind if you could have made that a hell of a lot more perverted. ^^ so feel free to write as your heart desires just make the updates quick!please?
Like it and i wouldn't mind if you could have made that a hell of a lot more perverted. ^^ so feel free to write as your heart desires just make the updates quick!please?