7/21/2018 c28 Guest
WHAT!? !
WHAT!? !
7/11/2016 c25 Do'B
Disappointed in this doctor and somewhat with Rose. No one and I mean no one would ever accept the advice this doctor was giving Rose in regards to dating, Dimitri is Rose's one true love and for the good doctor Jones to suggest Rose starts dating in the meantime or just until Dimitri starts to "remember" in no only unprofessional, but professionally immoral and unethical...unless the doctor has some other motivation? With Dimitri suffering from this memory loss I think that Rose would be more determined to spend time with Dimitri...
Disappointed in this doctor and somewhat with Rose. No one and I mean no one would ever accept the advice this doctor was giving Rose in regards to dating, Dimitri is Rose's one true love and for the good doctor Jones to suggest Rose starts dating in the meantime or just until Dimitri starts to "remember" in no only unprofessional, but professionally immoral and unethical...unless the doctor has some other motivation? With Dimitri suffering from this memory loss I think that Rose would be more determined to spend time with Dimitri...
7/11/2016 c2 Do'B
Okaaaaaaay, I was a bit confused in this chap as why would Rose allow Adrian to be so intimate with her in public and in front of Dimitri right after she and he had admitted their feelings for each other. Than as I continued to read I establish that Rose and Adrian are still together as in acouple, yet Rose has declared her love for and to Dimitri all the while still in a relationship with Adrian? That does not exactly put Rose in a very good position...and than at the table Adrian and Rose speaking openly and candidly about Rose leaving her earrings in Adrian's room? Rose is coming across as two timing.
Okaaaaaaay, I was a bit confused in this chap as why would Rose allow Adrian to be so intimate with her in public and in front of Dimitri right after she and he had admitted their feelings for each other. Than as I continued to read I establish that Rose and Adrian are still together as in acouple, yet Rose has declared her love for and to Dimitri all the while still in a relationship with Adrian? That does not exactly put Rose in a very good position...and than at the table Adrian and Rose speaking openly and candidly about Rose leaving her earrings in Adrian's room? Rose is coming across as two timing.
7/11/2016 c1 Do'B
This is a wonderful beginning, I liked how both Dimitri and Rose were able to sort through this without;
1. Have Lissa stick her bit in and smothering Dimitri and protecting him Rose, I never did like how Rose mollycoddled him-make Dimitri look weak and cowardly...or
2. Without it being dragged out, love fades, mine has and all that with Dimitri denying his love, Rose going around the bend and with Lissa interfering only enabling Dimitri to prolong his healing.
Will keep reading.
This is a wonderful beginning, I liked how both Dimitri and Rose were able to sort through this without;
1. Have Lissa stick her bit in and smothering Dimitri and protecting him Rose, I never did like how Rose mollycoddled him-make Dimitri look weak and cowardly...or
2. Without it being dragged out, love fades, mine has and all that with Dimitri denying his love, Rose going around the bend and with Lissa interfering only enabling Dimitri to prolong his healing.
Will keep reading.
3/31/2016 c2 Guest
I had hope for this story, it seems promising, that is, until you made Rose kiss Adrian like that and in front of Dimitri too! So stupid and unrealistic. Rose wouldn't do that. Ugh. Not gonna continue on with the story.
I had hope for this story, it seems promising, that is, until you made Rose kiss Adrian like that and in front of Dimitri too! So stupid and unrealistic. Rose wouldn't do that. Ugh. Not gonna continue on with the story.
7/10/2014 c2 3peacenotwar93
Okay... first of all - Rose wouldn't passionately kiss Adrian after getting back with Dimitri... ESPECIALLY with Dimitri mere metres away. Seriously, that's just unrealistic and not Rose at all.
Okay... first of all - Rose wouldn't passionately kiss Adrian after getting back with Dimitri... ESPECIALLY with Dimitri mere metres away. Seriously, that's just unrealistic and not Rose at all.
3/12/2013 c30 jhsdishidjmc
I always have wonder just a bit why spermatozoa donor or surrogate mothers are never mentioned... really loved this story though. I was unsure at the point of the first chapter but I really loved the rest of it.
I always have wonder just a bit why spermatozoa donor or surrogate mothers are never mentioned... really loved this story though. I was unsure at the point of the first chapter but I really loved the rest of it.
3/11/2013 c1 jhsdishidjmc
I was bit disappointed in how quickly and easily you wrapped his whole thing up. I feel Rose should have had more if her attitude. Because Lissa the girl she hes been best friends with since kindergarten is asking how Dimitri is before her. And at this point Dimitri is still all gaga over Lissa thinking that she saved him and Rose didn't. And I don't think Dimitri was gonna give into it that quickly even with all that she said because of the amount of guilt that he carries with him. I do also despise that this is all my personal opinion and am no way saying g that the quality of writing and such is any less.
I was bit disappointed in how quickly and easily you wrapped his whole thing up. I feel Rose should have had more if her attitude. Because Lissa the girl she hes been best friends with since kindergarten is asking how Dimitri is before her. And at this point Dimitri is still all gaga over Lissa thinking that she saved him and Rose didn't. And I don't think Dimitri was gonna give into it that quickly even with all that she said because of the amount of guilt that he carries with him. I do also despise that this is all my personal opinion and am no way saying g that the quality of writing and such is any less.
12/27/2012 c30 shadow-kissed angel
REALLY LOVED THE STORY! but I feel all bad for Andrew :( but I REALLY love how the last chapter wasn't like completely perfect all the way through for rose...
REALLY LOVED THE STORY! but I feel all bad for Andrew :( but I REALLY love how the last chapter wasn't like completely perfect all the way through for rose...
3/25/2012 c30 Guest
I loved ur story
It was amazing and even better than richelle's last sacrifice
Can you please write a sequel to this story
I loved ur story
It was amazing and even better than richelle's last sacrifice
Can you please write a sequel to this story
7/17/2011 c2 haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
okay wat the hell was huuHH why did she just make out with adrian wat is that wat is she a whore rose is over crying for dimika then she make out with adrian like some slut this story stupid and just for that am NOT ganna read this story why the hell is she making out with adrian i hate this story right i hate it i cant stand when stupid authors like u just make a girl into a random whore AWFULLLL STORY JUST AWFULLLLL
okay wat the hell was huuHH why did she just make out with adrian wat is that wat is she a whore rose is over crying for dimika then she make out with adrian like some slut this story stupid and just for that am NOT ganna read this story why the hell is she making out with adrian i hate this story right i hate it i cant stand when stupid authors like u just make a girl into a random whore AWFULLLL STORY JUST AWFULLLLL