
10/6/2010 c5
19Bobmin356
Honestly the whole scene with Narcissa was just disturbing. I mean really, she's old enough to be his mother. If that's the way you're going to go, with older women then I can't wait for you to hook him up with McGonagall and Amelia Bones or Neville's Grandmother. At least then it might be amusing to see them orgasm and have a heart attack at the same time.
In a word, gross.

Honestly the whole scene with Narcissa was just disturbing. I mean really, she's old enough to be his mother. If that's the way you're going to go, with older women then I can't wait for you to hook him up with McGonagall and Amelia Bones or Neville's Grandmother. At least then it might be amusing to see them orgasm and have a heart attack at the same time.
In a word, gross.
10/6/2010 c2
3BlueMageAscension
Looks good so far. Glad to see a Dark Harry story without massive slash, and I'm especially glad to see that he didn't get four thousand different lineage titles. Some of those stories work, but I like this idea better.

Looks good so far. Glad to see a Dark Harry story without massive slash, and I'm especially glad to see that he didn't get four thousand different lineage titles. Some of those stories work, but I like this idea better.
10/6/2010 c4 jamie.maike
Great story so far. Loved the sex scene with Luna. Can't wait to see the next chapter. How often do you plan on updating?
Great story so far. Loved the sex scene with Luna. Can't wait to see the next chapter. How often do you plan on updating?
10/5/2010 c4 JD
A often used scenario but you have written it well. My compliments.
A often used scenario but you have written it well. My compliments.