for First Black Wings ReWrite2/19/2011 c7 KijoKuroi
Hi, I just have to say that this is MUCH better than the first story. Although I'm wondering why Dinah is in control even though she's in Ember's form? I figured they'd be more like how Dark and Daisuke are, with the whole switching control thing. Also, I think she should be with Dark, or maybe Krad.
Hi, I just have to say that this is MUCH better than the first story. Although I'm wondering why Dinah is in control even though she's in Ember's form? I figured they'd be more like how Dark and Daisuke are, with the whole switching control thing. Also, I think she should be with Dark, or maybe Krad.
11/22/2011 c5 poison123
Bravo!Next chapter please,update soon!
Bravo!Next chapter please,update soon!
1/8/2011 c4 poison123
Brillent, absolutley amazing!I always loved this story... Good thing saying that Risa and Riku always knew about the curse but didn't tell anyone. I think that Ember should bring out her own wings first than later into the story, she should get a famillier because she didn't want Dinah to get hurt.Ja ne!
Brillent, absolutley amazing!I always loved this story... Good thing saying that Risa and Riku always knew about the curse but didn't tell anyone. I think that Ember should bring out her own wings first than later into the story, she should get a famillier because she didn't want Dinah to get hurt.Ja ne!
1/3/2011 c3 poison123
Hi it's me again. ~Was that my vote?~ Anyway, I loved this entire story ~though I'm kinda annoyed that you redid it...~ also, I read your Maximum Ride story and really enjoyed the fact that she is part cat.So, that's all I want to say today.sayonara! ~poof!Dissappears and all that is left is my love of Sato-kun.~
Hi it's me again. ~Was that my vote?~ Anyway, I loved this entire story ~though I'm kinda annoyed that you redid it...~ also, I read your Maximum Ride story and really enjoyed the fact that she is part cat.So, that's all I want to say today.sayonara! ~poof!Dissappears and all that is left is my love of Sato-kun.~
1/2/2011 c3 Tiryn
I would like you're chapters to be longer, but it's good so far.
I can't wait to read more ^^
I would like you're chapters to be longer, but it's good so far.
I can't wait to read more ^^
1/1/2011 c2 poison123
I read your first version and loved it!I would usally say pair the main character up with Sathshi-kun, but do whatever you want in this one. Can you keep the part when they dyed Dark's hair? I loved how the devil heard his scream. HAHAHA! Please keep that part! If you don't Ill find you and kill you! Sayonara!
I read your first version and loved it!I would usally say pair the main character up with Sathshi-kun, but do whatever you want in this one. Can you keep the part when they dyed Dark's hair? I loved how the devil heard his scream. HAHAHA! Please keep that part! If you don't Ill find you and kill you! Sayonara!