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10/10/2010 c3 BreeZ
Goood chapter! And i like that idea that that one person had about the dancing thing!

New Question!

Q) What is your fav tv show and why?
10/9/2010 c3 8Julia-Caesar
Love this story! Update soon! P.S. It's spelled 'mic.' Lol
10/8/2010 c2 Kate
wow its great keep it up!
10/8/2010 c2 MorningPerson
This isn't that good, definantly not good enough to bitch for reviews.

For starters Jayden is a Mary Sue, she utterly perfect. She's also a bit of a hypocrite because she complains about concieded people but she herself won't shut up about how perfect she looks.

Why do rich people hate being rich? In so many fanfics there's whiney rich kids. APPRECIATE WHAT YOU HAVE!

She also has a perfect voice, gets compliments be a OOC Gustavu and you aren't allowed to include entire songs in stories.

You do lots of telling but no showing. You SAY she's smart but there is no evidence written that she actually is.

This is in need of some serious editing.

Q. Why do you keep doing questions like this?

A. There is no reason it's just annoying.

Have a nice day:)
10/8/2010 c2 Immagleek3
Great story! I like that Breanne girl, but instead of a model, she should be a professional dancer! Like brittney from glee good! And yall should do a duet together, like messin around and then guestavo sees and wants to make a music video of it! And it shld b the song that brittney and santana sang on the brittney episode in glee just more appropriate

Q) Do you like glee? If so what is your fav character!
10/8/2010 c2 BreeZ
Aaah sorry! Different story! I meant you have james covered
10/8/2010 c2 BreeZ
AAAAAAAH THAT WAS SO COOL! Oh that made me so happy! THANK YOU! Oh and if u need a BTR boy for her, anyone but james! But it looks like youve got kendall covered :P oh and if you want her first song do any of these plz!

a) Only Girl by Rihanna

b) Round and Round by Selena Gomez

c) Animal by Neon Trees

d) Misery by Maroon5

Q1) Fav artist and song by that artist!

Thanks for putting me in the story!
10/8/2010 c1 6Munchkin Jeeves
Hey cool start. she should fall for James gradually, cause James will probarly think that she's just another actress when she is probarly just as brainy as Logan. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
10/7/2010 c1 skb.0104
i say she should fall for him slowly

and i have a question 4 you as well

Q)if you met justin bieber what would you do?
10/7/2010 c1 BreeZ
Hey i luv ur story!

To answer your question i think she shld DETEST all of them, especially james so gradually!

Now 2 questions for you! Well ones more of a favor but anyways,

1) If you could have any super power what would it be and why?

2) I dont mean to be blunt, but can i have an OC? Lke one of her best friends at the palm woods? Heres an app jic:

Lalala321 10/6 ch1

Ok so ive never picked for sn OC so hope you pick me!

Name: Breanne Ryan Summers

Age: 16

Birthday: October 31

Personality: Fiesty but normally sweet. Can have a devious mind, and loves pranks, but only if they work. Always has her freiends' backs. Is very athletic and plays volleyball and is cheer captain at her high school. She is smart, but not a genious, and had definately had her share of bad grades. Has a weird instinct of when someone's lieing or faking.

Apperance: Long blonde hair that goes just above her ribcage. She has light blue eyes that have a rim of navy around them. She is short for her age, at 5"3. She alwAys has a slight tan, and a muscular build.

Talents/Hobbies: Breanne is very good a gymnadtics. Anything you can think of, she can do it. She likes to play volleyball and cheerleading, and likes to model. Her secret wish is to be a singer/songwriter and wants to make it big time.

Likes/Dislikes:* Like i said before* She DETESTS people who hurt her or her friends. She doesn't like liars, posers, backstabbers, etc. She does like selena gomez, paramore, rihanna jason mraz and has a soft spot for disney music.

History/Background: Breanne has one Older bro whos named Daniel. Hes 20, and has a very close relationship. She had a father named Jeff, who was in the Marines. He was on leave for one week before being deported back to a secret location. She and her dad were on their way to see a movie together before he left, when they were in a car crash. Her dad was killed instantly, and Breanne feels like it was her fault for distracting him. She still has nightmares about the accident and keeps her dads dogtags with her everywhere and everyday. Her mom is a workaholic and has a new boyfriend, who, when drunk, is abusive. Her moms boyfriend also gave Breanne her half sister, Melrose, whos 5 months. Breanne met Kelsey in Kindergarten, when James stole her Barbiedoll and helped her get it back.

Other Facts: Breanne also goes by Bree, Breeze and Breezey because of her personality. She is also VERY ticklish and loves extreme pranks. She is also competetive. And when she doesnt want to listen, she zones herself out. One more thing: she has an EXTREMELY short temper, and can pack a punch when needed

Its fine if you dont want to tho! Ive just never had a oc before so i thought itd be fun!
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