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11/28/2014 c1 SkynardTLB
Well it's defiantly not boreing am just woundaring if your going to continue and what personality you are going to give the nickle head! Also if you need a beta hit me up peace.
5/30/2014 c1 340fringeperson
It's certainly an interesting starting point. I hope to see more before too long.
2/20/2011 c1 30Manga154
Wow! So will reaven's apprentice had a back story in the shinobi world? Please keep this going!
11/27/2010 c1 6WraithReaper
This story shows promise can't wait to see it be fulfilled.
10/13/2010 c1 mq
nice cincept, if you cntinue writing this story pls make the chapters longer and update regularly. i am curious where the name ihbonis came from, was it just from eroslacker or is it the actual name of narutos planet
10/11/2010 c1 10nobother
decent opener
10/10/2010 c1 Appo1119
Even though it was really short, this seems interesting. A few problems did stick out. First, Force is capitalized always. Second, use commas. The fourth paragraph had a sentence that had 95 words in it and only one comma. The last thing was in the last paragraph. You went into present tense talking about Revan's actions instead of past tense. Just remember, you're telling a story, not narrating live events. Hope to see more soon.
10/10/2010 c1 Fury074
I suppose this would be a prologue then. Please remember to add a disclaimer stating you don't own Naruto or Star Wars.

Good start so far, please update soon.

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