for Why?1/8/2011 c4 
11x-x-Rhii-x-x
I really like the way you write, and the plot's very good. I want to see what happens next! :)
11x-x-Rhii-x-xI really like the way you write, and the plot's very good. I want to see what happens next! :)
11/30/2010 c3 Molly
Nice idea. I 3 them but it just doesn't seem that believable. Well written though, I think the snappy change of perspective works. V.curious about the man at the door too!
Nice idea. I 3 them but it just doesn't seem that believable. Well written though, I think the snappy change of perspective works. V.curious about the man at the door too!
10/28/2010 c1 38Moonphase
Always great to see this pairing :)
It ws a bit difficult to read with all the different POV's. Is there any way youcould make it easier? Like maybe putting (Frans POV) above Frans part, or putting a line between each change or scene change? Something like that would be really helpful :)
38MoonphaseAlways great to see this pairing :)
It ws a bit difficult to read with all the different POV's. Is there any way youcould make it easier? Like maybe putting (Frans POV) above Frans part, or putting a line between each change or scene change? Something like that would be really helpful :)