for Greater Than, Lesser Be11/27/2024 c1 Guest
You could've done the beginning better. A trained assassin getting outmaneuvered by his wife is not believable at all. So a spec ops infiltration unit member, trained in stealth, combat & deletion of targets, would get the drop on a woman...his woman...and she would somehow be able to get out of that situation? It's just not believable.
You could've done the beginning better. A trained assassin getting outmaneuvered by his wife is not believable at all. So a spec ops infiltration unit member, trained in stealth, combat & deletion of targets, would get the drop on a woman...his woman...and she would somehow be able to get out of that situation? It's just not believable.
9/21/2024 c5 
10RevDorothyL
Hooray! I'm glad Harry Houdini's Ginny didn't get away with it after all, and that older Harry now has a chance to settle some scores and possibly right some wrongs in his reality, after all that he had done and sacrificed to give young Harry Potter and his friends and loved ones a much brighter and happier future. Well done!
10RevDorothyLHooray! I'm glad Harry Houdini's Ginny didn't get away with it after all, and that older Harry now has a chance to settle some scores and possibly right some wrongs in his reality, after all that he had done and sacrificed to give young Harry Potter and his friends and loved ones a much brighter and happier future. Well done!
4/22/2024 c5 embracethebright
I like the story. But the ending confused me. Was older Harry Temporarily displaced from his dimension to help a different Harry. Then brought back to his original dimension? If his time travel didn't affect his past what's he going to do now?
I like the story. But the ending confused me. Was older Harry Temporarily displaced from his dimension to help a different Harry. Then brought back to his original dimension? If his time travel didn't affect his past what's he going to do now?
3/17/2024 c5 lunaz
Second time around reading this and loving it. I still wanted more. An epilogue of where the two Harry's were at a few years later but the I do so loved the last line. "I'm home!"
Second time around reading this and loving it. I still wanted more. An epilogue of where the two Harry's were at a few years later but the I do so loved the last line. "I'm home!"
2/21/2024 c5 Guest
Loved it. The ending was amazing
Loved it. The ending was amazing
2/8/2024 c5 2Wyrmridr
Wow! This was a great twist on the time-travel trope. And I ***LOVE*** the ending. Thanks for writing!
-J
Moo.
2WyrmridrWow! This was a great twist on the time-travel trope. And I ***LOVE*** the ending. Thanks for writing!
-J
Moo.
2/4/2024 c5 6ImUpToNoGood
Yay. Harry (Houdini) Potter gets to be with his children, and will certainly work to free those others who have been controlled. This would be an interesting sequel.
Young Harry Potter from the other world gets to live and grow and create.
Two worlds with such possibilities!
Thank you for this story. The progression of the story was delightful, and The ending was eminently satisfying.
6ImUpToNoGoodYay. Harry (Houdini) Potter gets to be with his children, and will certainly work to free those others who have been controlled. This would be an interesting sequel.
Young Harry Potter from the other world gets to live and grow and create.
Two worlds with such possibilities!
Thank you for this story. The progression of the story was delightful, and The ending was eminently satisfying.
1/19/2024 c5 Love2read23
It's interesting that Harry went back to his old reality. While I'm glad that Ginny doesn't get all of Harry's stuff, it's a bummer he isn't with the friends he's developed over the decade plus in the other reality.
I love the company and all that they accomplished. It's sad and super sucks Harry had to stay with the Dursleys. And that Sirius remained in Azkaban. But it was super awesome they took out Voldie the night he returned. Young Harry seems like a good kid, a little bit more diligent and a little bit more compassionate. It's nice.
Super excited for how Harry wipes his old world into shape. He still needs to free all his friends from their potioning.
Thank you for writing!
It's interesting that Harry went back to his old reality. While I'm glad that Ginny doesn't get all of Harry's stuff, it's a bummer he isn't with the friends he's developed over the decade plus in the other reality.
I love the company and all that they accomplished. It's sad and super sucks Harry had to stay with the Dursleys. And that Sirius remained in Azkaban. But it was super awesome they took out Voldie the night he returned. Young Harry seems like a good kid, a little bit more diligent and a little bit more compassionate. It's nice.
Super excited for how Harry wipes his old world into shape. He still needs to free all his friends from their potioning.
Thank you for writing!
12/27/2023 c5 SMB
That's where you ended it? FUCK. YOU.
What a fucking waste of time reading all that crap.
That's where you ended it? FUCK. YOU.
What a fucking waste of time reading all that crap.