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10/11/2010 c1 FatesShadow83
Great start!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
10/11/2010 c1 Cateagle
Welcome back, you've been missed. This is a great start to a story and I look forward to seeing just how much Harry alters the timeline when his younger self enters Hogwarts. If he does it right, Albus and the Weasleys will never know what hit them; nor will Tom Riddle.
10/11/2010 c1 20ears
Excellent start, this should definitely be interesting to see how Harry H's company progresses and how he saves Harry from the manipulations of old Harry's past. Looking forward to seeing how the company progresses and evolves.
10/11/2010 c1 1Bobboky
awesome
10/11/2010 c1 23Rori Potter
That was great. Update soon.
10/11/2010 c1 spazmodic
i almost skipped this lovely story am loving it, pls update sooner and also there should be an indication whether this will turn out to be a slash or not
10/10/2010 c1 7Marauder no. Five
great story, i'm loving it so far. harry houdini ^-^

i hope you do update soon. this is great.
10/10/2010 c1 stonegnome1
A suggestion or two

2. Hire a competent account of some sort that knows about the magical world.

accountant rather than account

Unsure of how to progress, Harry realised something.

proceed rather than progress
10/10/2010 c1 Memory King
Sounds pretty interesting, pretty solid stuff in the non-bashing parts. Was personally hoping that the other Ginny would feel time rearrange around her, but that's probably just my liking for chaos talking.

The HP universe has excellent potential for 3D technology if Pensieves are red-conned enough. Actually being a part of the crowd would probably be awesome for Quidditch fans.

Really liking the story on the whole at the moment, hoping to read more of it soon!

P.S.: Whyckham rewrite sounds pretty interesting, especially if Harry does less of going to Hogwarts to solve the canon shit, regardless of Dumbledore's wishes.
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