for Greater Than, Lesser Be10/16/2010 c2 Cateagle
I love this chapter and the way older!Harry and Remus are already starting to unravel Dumbledore's plans, though he doesn't know it, yet. I love that the technological remaking of the Ministry seems to have him somewhat at ease. I'm quite certain that'd he'd love to oppose it but find a valid arguement for his opposition. That Camilla and Remus have interferred and made sure he first met up with Hermione and set up the beginning of a solid friendship is definitely going to affect matters (I can't wait to see how Dumbles handles things when he finds out that Molly and her brood didn't encounter him at all (for that matter, I wonder how much Hagrid told Albus of Remus taking Harry through Diagon Alley?). I think the Grangers appreciate the humor with which Cloak & Dagger operates and I suspect they're going to make a good friend in Remus.
Letting his top people in on the big secret should yield interesting results. I'm wondering just how much Harry's efforts interfered with Dumble's spell? I suspect it was "just" supposed to send the spirit back without the body or memories instead of sending the whole Harry back. It'll be interesting to see how "mini-me" Harry fares now that he's been clued in and accessed to what he can use at this time; I suspect Albus will not be happy that he knows all this (I'm also willing to bet that he's been given protections against obliviation, legilmancy, and other mind magics.
I understand how/why RL is interfering with your writing and I wish you as easy a time of it as possible.
I love this chapter and the way older!Harry and Remus are already starting to unravel Dumbledore's plans, though he doesn't know it, yet. I love that the technological remaking of the Ministry seems to have him somewhat at ease. I'm quite certain that'd he'd love to oppose it but find a valid arguement for his opposition. That Camilla and Remus have interferred and made sure he first met up with Hermione and set up the beginning of a solid friendship is definitely going to affect matters (I can't wait to see how Dumbles handles things when he finds out that Molly and her brood didn't encounter him at all (for that matter, I wonder how much Hagrid told Albus of Remus taking Harry through Diagon Alley?). I think the Grangers appreciate the humor with which Cloak & Dagger operates and I suspect they're going to make a good friend in Remus.
Letting his top people in on the big secret should yield interesting results. I'm wondering just how much Harry's efforts interfered with Dumble's spell? I suspect it was "just" supposed to send the spirit back without the body or memories instead of sending the whole Harry back. It'll be interesting to see how "mini-me" Harry fares now that he's been clued in and accessed to what he can use at this time; I suspect Albus will not be happy that he knows all this (I'm also willing to bet that he's been given protections against obliviation, legilmancy, and other mind magics.
I understand how/why RL is interfering with your writing and I wish you as easy a time of it as possible.
10/16/2010 c2 
10Wonderbee31
Yay! Update part deux! LOL, Really enjoyed this a lot here, and wondering if no romance, then older Harry will never find somone that likes him for himself? Shame that. Liked how L'il Harry and Hermione got on with each other, and with him being more motivated, Ron might not tbe the influence in his life like the canon version, just hoping that Harry can get through the troubles that Dumbledore will be heaping on him.
10Wonderbee31Yay! Update part deux! LOL, Really enjoyed this a lot here, and wondering if no romance, then older Harry will never find somone that likes him for himself? Shame that. Liked how L'il Harry and Hermione got on with each other, and with him being more motivated, Ron might not tbe the influence in his life like the canon version, just hoping that Harry can get through the troubles that Dumbledore will be heaping on him.
10/12/2010 c1 Wonderbee31
First off, whoopah! Great to see another story from you, this started out with a bang indeed. A great twist on the old time travel thing, and will be looking forward to what happens as Harry looks to be ready to bludgeon his way through the magical world, as well as what will happen as he tries to reconcile himself with what seems to have been a lifetime of betrayal and manipulation?
First off, whoopah! Great to see another story from you, this started out with a bang indeed. A great twist on the old time travel thing, and will be looking forward to what happens as Harry looks to be ready to bludgeon his way through the magical world, as well as what will happen as he tries to reconcile himself with what seems to have been a lifetime of betrayal and manipulation?
10/11/2010 c1 Cateagle
Welcome back, you've been missed. This is a great start to a story and I look forward to seeing just how much Harry alters the timeline when his younger self enters Hogwarts. If he does it right, Albus and the Weasleys will never know what hit them; nor will Tom Riddle.
Welcome back, you've been missed. This is a great start to a story and I look forward to seeing just how much Harry alters the timeline when his younger self enters Hogwarts. If he does it right, Albus and the Weasleys will never know what hit them; nor will Tom Riddle.
10/11/2010 c1 20ears
Excellent start, this should definitely be interesting to see how Harry H's company progresses and how he saves Harry from the manipulations of old Harry's past. Looking forward to seeing how the company progresses and evolves.
20earsExcellent start, this should definitely be interesting to see how Harry H's company progresses and how he saves Harry from the manipulations of old Harry's past. Looking forward to seeing how the company progresses and evolves.
10/11/2010 c1 spazmodic
i almost skipped this lovely story am loving it, pls update sooner and also there should be an indication whether this will turn out to be a slash or not
i almost skipped this lovely story am loving it, pls update sooner and also there should be an indication whether this will turn out to be a slash or not
10/10/2010 c1 7Marauder no. Five
great story, i'm loving it so far. harry houdini ^-^
i hope you do update soon. this is great.
7Marauder no. Fivegreat story, i'm loving it so far. harry houdini ^-^
i hope you do update soon. this is great.
10/10/2010 c1 stonegnome1
A suggestion or two
2. Hire a competent account of some sort that knows about the magical world.
accountant rather than account
Unsure of how to progress, Harry realised something.
proceed rather than progress
A suggestion or two
2. Hire a competent account of some sort that knows about the magical world.
accountant rather than account
Unsure of how to progress, Harry realised something.
proceed rather than progress
10/10/2010 c1 Memory King
Sounds pretty interesting, pretty solid stuff in the non-bashing parts. Was personally hoping that the other Ginny would feel time rearrange around her, but that's probably just my liking for chaos talking.
The HP universe has excellent potential for 3D technology if Pensieves are red-conned enough. Actually being a part of the crowd would probably be awesome for Quidditch fans.
Really liking the story on the whole at the moment, hoping to read more of it soon!
P.S.: Whyckham rewrite sounds pretty interesting, especially if Harry does less of going to Hogwarts to solve the canon shit, regardless of Dumbledore's wishes.
Sounds pretty interesting, pretty solid stuff in the non-bashing parts. Was personally hoping that the other Ginny would feel time rearrange around her, but that's probably just my liking for chaos talking.
The HP universe has excellent potential for 3D technology if Pensieves are red-conned enough. Actually being a part of the crowd would probably be awesome for Quidditch fans.
Really liking the story on the whole at the moment, hoping to read more of it soon!
P.S.: Whyckham rewrite sounds pretty interesting, especially if Harry does less of going to Hogwarts to solve the canon shit, regardless of Dumbledore's wishes.