for Happy Birthday Naruto10/14/2010 c1 mina
i love how you made a point to say 'rated M for a reason' LOL obviously i missed that reason
i love how you made a point to say 'rated M for a reason' LOL obviously i missed that reason
10/12/2010 c1 blackjuel
There are a few errors that need fixed. Someparts of the story didn't flow well together due to sentence structure, but nothing that can't be fixed. The story was interesting. Just out of curiosity, have you ever participated in nanowrimo?
There are a few errors that need fixed. Someparts of the story didn't flow well together due to sentence structure, but nothing that can't be fixed. The story was interesting. Just out of curiosity, have you ever participated in nanowrimo?
10/12/2010 c1 
9Inuyonas
Well well well. Here you are again writing a NEW fanfic. You know normalyy I 'm against Yaoi but since it's YOU who is writing it I'll stomach this fic. :) I'm such a nice guy you know...
lol but great fic. It's written expertly...
Now if we could put Hinata or Ino instead of Sasuke...lol
9InuyonasWell well well. Here you are again writing a NEW fanfic. You know normalyy I 'm against Yaoi but since it's YOU who is writing it I'll stomach this fic. :) I'm such a nice guy you know...
lol but great fic. It's written expertly...
Now if we could put Hinata or Ino instead of Sasuke...lol