for BRONZE4/27 c23 SianJohn
Just finished another reread of this fab story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us and leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
Just finished another reread of this fab story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us and leaving it here for us to enjoy time and time again.
3/23 c23 Guest
I love it. Just finished another reread. Your story is refreshing and original. Thanks for keeping it out here for us, many years later.
I love it. Just finished another reread. Your story is refreshing and original. Thanks for keeping it out here for us, many years later.
1/29 c1 Renee Aubin
I just finished reading BRONZE, and my head is still spinning. I've been reading Twific for (too many) years, and have known OF this story forever, but I finally picked it up from my TBR list.
I am so impressed! There are not many stories that have such a unique and smart premise, that is so meticulously thought through and executed. AND is a ripping good tale. AND has a wonderful Edward and a fascinating Bella (never thought I'd put those two words together).
My absolute favorite aspect was Bella's discipline of relentless, right-here-right-now mindfulness, as a way (it turns out) of avoiding triggering her power. It was wonderful to see how that looked in a variety of moments, and how Edward learned from it, albeit reluctantly.
Mothlights is also one of those writers who can put together a sentence that is so evocative and/or beautiful that it just makes you stop and catch your breath.
Bravo! Don't miss this one.
I just finished reading BRONZE, and my head is still spinning. I've been reading Twific for (too many) years, and have known OF this story forever, but I finally picked it up from my TBR list.
I am so impressed! There are not many stories that have such a unique and smart premise, that is so meticulously thought through and executed. AND is a ripping good tale. AND has a wonderful Edward and a fascinating Bella (never thought I'd put those two words together).
My absolute favorite aspect was Bella's discipline of relentless, right-here-right-now mindfulness, as a way (it turns out) of avoiding triggering her power. It was wonderful to see how that looked in a variety of moments, and how Edward learned from it, albeit reluctantly.
Mothlights is also one of those writers who can put together a sentence that is so evocative and/or beautiful that it just makes you stop and catch your breath.
Bravo! Don't miss this one.
7/20/2022 c23 atouchofcitron
truly impeccable writing. i loved the shifting perspectives, bella's incredible backstory and ability, and the story in itself was gripping. thank you so much for this.
truly impeccable writing. i loved the shifting perspectives, bella's incredible backstory and ability, and the story in itself was gripping. thank you so much for this.
10/23/2021 c7 
3jaanavihairani
Edward throughout this book: Umm, Mommy. Sorry, mommy! Sorry, mommy? Sorry, Mommy.
3jaanavihairaniEdward throughout this book: Umm, Mommy. Sorry, mommy! Sorry, mommy? Sorry, Mommy.
9/25/2021 c23 TheFenrisWulf
What magnificent writing and a hidden gem, i loved this story, thank you so much
What magnificent writing and a hidden gem, i loved this story, thank you so much
8/26/2021 c23 15winterhorses
Le sigh. I love these two so much. I also love how you carried the object of the title through the story and brought the theme full circle at the end. Excellently done in every way.
15winterhorsesLe sigh. I love these two so much. I also love how you carried the object of the title through the story and brought the theme full circle at the end. Excellently done in every way.