for BRONZE10/26/2013 c1 sneaksandskinnies
I didn't know that i haven't finished reading this till now. I think I started reading this since 2011 or 2012 haha. THIS STORY IS SO DIFFERENT, SO ORIGINAL. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Keep writing :)
I didn't know that i haven't finished reading this till now. I think I started reading this since 2011 or 2012 haha. THIS STORY IS SO DIFFERENT, SO ORIGINAL. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Keep writing :)
10/15/2013 c2 Sailaranel
Wow, a very strong Bella! I like how she explains she won't treat him as a kid, and then follows up by laying into him! Very cool!
Can't wait to see her power/ talent properly!
Wow, a very strong Bella! I like how she explains she won't treat him as a kid, and then follows up by laying into him! Very cool!
Can't wait to see her power/ talent properly!
10/6/2013 c23 thweasleykid
loved it to death
loved it to death
9/15/2013 c23 Anita
Wow, great story.
And thank you for sending Bella and Edward to India, where I'm from. First story I've read with India on the itinerary.
Thank you.
Wow, great story.
And thank you for sending Bella and Edward to India, where I'm from. First story I've read with India on the itinerary.
Thank you.
9/10/2013 c23 ESHLuckyThirteen
I'm rather late to the party, sorry about that. This is a wonderful story, well written and original. You did a wonderful job with this, and I hope you're still around to read this review : D
I'm rather late to the party, sorry about that. This is a wonderful story, well written and original. You did a wonderful job with this, and I hope you're still around to read this review : D
7/25/2013 c23 Peela Rites
I absolutely love the story and the way you write and build upon your plot and characters. Thank you for the great read.
I absolutely love the story and the way you write and build upon your plot and characters. Thank you for the great read.
7/13/2013 c23 lesuse
Very intriguing story - loved this Edward and Bella and the rest of the family. So nice to meet Bat - hope he went back for Mary - and Ginnie was a hoot and how about a smitten, whipped Demetri (you know I can find you anywhere, right?) Not sure I love Alec and Jane in charge. And, how about a bad**s Bella cleaning house at Volterra. Very creative - had an epic feel - a story to be told by word of mouth passed down thru generations instead of written! Excellent storytelling - old yet modern!
Very intriguing story - loved this Edward and Bella and the rest of the family. So nice to meet Bat - hope he went back for Mary - and Ginnie was a hoot and how about a smitten, whipped Demetri (you know I can find you anywhere, right?) Not sure I love Alec and Jane in charge. And, how about a bad**s Bella cleaning house at Volterra. Very creative - had an epic feel - a story to be told by word of mouth passed down thru generations instead of written! Excellent storytelling - old yet modern!
6/3/2013 c23 
6MarchHare5
Loved this. I really enjoyed the very different take on the characters, and it was well written.
6MarchHare5Loved this. I really enjoyed the very different take on the characters, and it was well written.
6/1/2013 c3 1Marie Mermaids
I love chess... that was a huge bonus in this very different story. loving it
1Marie MermaidsI love chess... that was a huge bonus in this very different story. loving it
5/29/2013 c13 bethers7477
I don't know if you still read reviews for this story, but I just came upon it after seeing it recommended at ADF. Wow. It is so damn good. I am completely captivated. That has not happened in fan fiction for me for a very long time. Thank you!
I don't know if you still read reviews for this story, but I just came upon it after seeing it recommended at ADF. Wow. It is so damn good. I am completely captivated. That has not happened in fan fiction for me for a very long time. Thank you!