for The Morning After7/2/2011 c3 
1AllieCatt
The only problem I had with the "journal entries" is that they weren't entries... they were simply sentences that could've been expressed to each other in person. The first two entries or so (the longer ones) were fine, but with Belle and the Beast, I just feel that their relationship is one that may start in a journal, but it wouldn't continue there.
1AllieCattThe only problem I had with the "journal entries" is that they weren't entries... they were simply sentences that could've been expressed to each other in person. The first two entries or so (the longer ones) were fine, but with Belle and the Beast, I just feel that their relationship is one that may start in a journal, but it wouldn't continue there.
7/2/2011 c3 14The Green Archer
That was a really sweet chapter. I was actually a bit worried, because Will's uncertainty about being a parent is something I was going to use in my own post-transformation fanfic, lol. Now I'll have to be careful that mine doesn't sound too much like yours ^^
The one thing I didn't like about the letters was the line 'Gee thanks Belle for respecting my space.' Considering the time period I think that sounded a bit too modern and a little OOC for Will as well. Maybe if you changed it to something like 'It's nice to know that my wife is looking through my journals now.' or 'Don't you have other things to read apart from my journals, Belle?' it would sound a bit better. Other than that, it was pretty good. I'd be interesting in seeing how Will and Belle interact with their new daughter, but of course it's really up to you how you want the story to continue.
Good luck with your writing! :)
14The Green ArcherThat was a really sweet chapter. I was actually a bit worried, because Will's uncertainty about being a parent is something I was going to use in my own post-transformation fanfic, lol. Now I'll have to be careful that mine doesn't sound too much like yours ^^
The one thing I didn't like about the letters was the line 'Gee thanks Belle for respecting my space.' Considering the time period I think that sounded a bit too modern and a little OOC for Will as well. Maybe if you changed it to something like 'It's nice to know that my wife is looking through my journals now.' or 'Don't you have other things to read apart from my journals, Belle?' it would sound a bit better. Other than that, it was pretty good. I'd be interesting in seeing how Will and Belle interact with their new daughter, but of course it's really up to you how you want the story to continue.
Good luck with your writing! :)
5/7/2011 c4 elezabethe
great chapter pls make a new one
great chapter pls make a new one
4/25/2011 c4 elezabethe
great story and i really really want you to write it. i love this story beauty and the beast so please write this chapter. i really love your story. so i hope you see this and write a chapter. love me, no just kidding, love elezabethe kisses
great story and i really really want you to write it. i love this story beauty and the beast so please write this chapter. i really love your story. so i hope you see this and write a chapter. love me, no just kidding, love elezabethe kisses
2/17/2011 c4 Katherine
Please keep going I would love it if you would do one last chapter...PLEASE
Please keep going I would love it if you would do one last chapter...PLEASE
2/17/2011 c4 6Amelie de Lorraine
I would love for you to continue. Please do so, but take your time!
Amelie
6Amelie de LorraineI would love for you to continue. Please do so, but take your time!
Amelie
2/17/2011 c4 17KiraJenLove
I wouldn't mind if you wrote the birth as an epilogue rather than a whole chapter. I guess I -ust like closure. (Sorry, my "letter before k" button doesn.'t work).
17KiraJenLoveI wouldn't mind if you wrote the birth as an epilogue rather than a whole chapter. I guess I -ust like closure. (Sorry, my "letter before k" button doesn.'t work).
2/8/2011 c1 Mistress 0f Dragons
good start. although i did notice a spelling error. Perpose should be Proposed.
good start. although i did notice a spelling error. Perpose should be Proposed.
1/23/2011 c3 DisneyPrincess
BEAUTIFUL! I never thought of the enchantress who cursed the Beast as a rejected lover or something like that...very clever!
BEAUTIFUL! I never thought of the enchantress who cursed the Beast as a rejected lover or something like that...very clever!
1/23/2011 c2 DisneyPrincess
Omigosh, I LOOOOOVE weddings! Wonderful! But I feel bad for poor little Chip, though.
Omigosh, I LOOOOOVE weddings! Wonderful! But I feel bad for poor little Chip, though.
1/23/2011 c1 DisneyPrincess
Awww, very sweet!
I'm sorry, but to me Beast will always be Adam.
Awww, very sweet!
I'm sorry, but to me Beast will always be Adam.
1/18/2011 c3 6Amelie de Lorraine
Hi!
I loved chapter two! Chip was so cute! He acts just like a little kid. Jealous that Belle is being taken away and can't spend time with him. He'll learn some day. At least he got to spend time with Will. That was cute. And I loved the wedding and Belle's thoughts on her life as Queen and before. So sweet. We never get to actually see her getting married in canon, so we don't know how she feels. I think you captured it perfectly. Loved the end,too! Chip having a new playmate would be great:). Thanks for writing!
Amelie
6Amelie de LorraineHi!
I loved chapter two! Chip was so cute! He acts just like a little kid. Jealous that Belle is being taken away and can't spend time with him. He'll learn some day. At least he got to spend time with Will. That was cute. And I loved the wedding and Belle's thoughts on her life as Queen and before. So sweet. We never get to actually see her getting married in canon, so we don't know how she feels. I think you captured it perfectly. Loved the end,too! Chip having a new playmate would be great:). Thanks for writing!
Amelie