
12/5/2010 c1
1EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen
What the heck is your problem is not Edward and Bella story why did you put this story in Bella/Edward. You should put this story in Nessie or Renesmee. Please move this out of Bella/Edward.

What the heck is your problem is not Edward and Bella story why did you put this story in Bella/Edward. You should put this story in Nessie or Renesmee. Please move this out of Bella/Edward.
12/5/2010 c1
4blood6theif
Just a heads up... the summary sucked so bad that I didn't bother to read this. Tuff? 'Tough' isn't all that hard to spell, hun... and your grammar made me cry.

Just a heads up... the summary sucked so bad that I didn't bother to read this. Tuff? 'Tough' isn't all that hard to spell, hun... and your grammar made me cry.
11/27/2010 c4 Skye S. Angel
I really liked it! This story is very good so far. I can't wait for more. i think it would add a little bit of spice if Nessie kept having flashbacks of Alec or her life with the Volturi. Just an idea. so...ya :)
I really liked it! This story is very good so far. I can't wait for more. i think it would add a little bit of spice if Nessie kept having flashbacks of Alec or her life with the Volturi. Just an idea. so...ya :)