
10/17/2010 c1 baceba
really neat - I was scared you finished with this story. Thank you, thank you :-)
really neat - I was scared you finished with this story. Thank you, thank you :-)
10/17/2010 c1
5Fallen-Petals15
good chapter, but couldnt you have put the chapter and thes tory on the end of common ground?

good chapter, but couldnt you have put the chapter and thes tory on the end of common ground?
10/16/2010 c1
17Lady Sabine of Macayhill
Fantastic start. I wonder how the confrontation with Malfoy will turn out. Please update soon.

Fantastic start. I wonder how the confrontation with Malfoy will turn out. Please update soon.
10/16/2010 c1
7jada951
glad to see a con't of your story.
Yes, good to see Madame P. in a story and getting some help AND evolving beyond a cardboard character.
I must admit, the one ff for HP that I have (in my head) does have to do w/ Madame P. (or rather someone else in her family...

glad to see a con't of your story.
Yes, good to see Madame P. in a story and getting some help AND evolving beyond a cardboard character.
I must admit, the one ff for HP that I have (in my head) does have to do w/ Madame P. (or rather someone else in her family...
10/16/2010 c1 DarkRavie
Very good beginning to your sequel. I look forward to reading what happens next in this story.
Very good beginning to your sequel. I look forward to reading what happens next in this story.
10/16/2010 c1 jessirose85
I think nothing should change between them but Snape becomes proud of Harry when he walks away and doesn't hex Malfoy!
I think nothing should change between them but Snape becomes proud of Harry when he walks away and doesn't hex Malfoy!
10/16/2010 c1 Gyvir26
Yes! I'm so glad you decided to continue with this sequel; there's so much that can be explored with what you opened up in the first one.
Since Harry loves the Library, it's good to see him getting involved with its repairs. I also like the tension you've set up between Harry's understanding of Snape and Ron's Slytherin/Snape bias, which he simply doesn't seem able to relinquish very easily. It's all very nice for the drama, but the psychotically opposed Ron does get a bit unreal-Harry and Ron's friendship should be solid enough that Ron accepts Harry's opinions, even if he doesn't agree with them. Though the books have shown Ron's unreasonableness throughout, I always hope he'll gain some sort of understanding.
Anyways, good to see this; I'm waiting for more!
Yes! I'm so glad you decided to continue with this sequel; there's so much that can be explored with what you opened up in the first one.
Since Harry loves the Library, it's good to see him getting involved with its repairs. I also like the tension you've set up between Harry's understanding of Snape and Ron's Slytherin/Snape bias, which he simply doesn't seem able to relinquish very easily. It's all very nice for the drama, but the psychotically opposed Ron does get a bit unreal-Harry and Ron's friendship should be solid enough that Ron accepts Harry's opinions, even if he doesn't agree with them. Though the books have shown Ron's unreasonableness throughout, I always hope he'll gain some sort of understanding.
Anyways, good to see this; I'm waiting for more!
10/16/2010 c1
14firefly5151
Yea, a sequel. I was so glad to see this new story in my email.
I sure hope Draco doesn't plan on doing anything to Harry.
Update soon!

Yea, a sequel. I was so glad to see this new story in my email.
I sure hope Draco doesn't plan on doing anything to Harry.
Update soon!
10/16/2010 c1
84supergirl3684
YAY! I'm so glad to see you're writing a sequel! :D It was brilliant! I LOVE it already! I actually like Madam Pince! Harry and Draco...I think I'll just hide until it's over! :D

YAY! I'm so glad to see you're writing a sequel! :D It was brilliant! I LOVE it already! I actually like Madam Pince! Harry and Draco...I think I'll just hide until it's over! :D
10/16/2010 c1
174blue artemis
Sigh. Draco and his goons. I did like the interaction with Irma, though.

Sigh. Draco and his goons. I did like the interaction with Irma, though.
10/16/2010 c1
30Celebwen Telcontar
I like the start of the story, and I like how you portrayed Madame Pince. Please continue.
CT

I like the start of the story, and I like how you portrayed Madame Pince. Please continue.
CT