Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for A Story To Tell

10/24/2013 c15 37Breyito
Okay, this chapter was very original, but if you dont mind, I will correct the sentences (Google traductor is not a very good source, believe me) I'm Argentinian, so I cant let this great work be ruined because of spanish.
Let's see:
-¿Porqué continuas siguiéndome?
-¿Te gusto o algo?
-¿Quieres que te bese?
-¿Estaba en lo correcto, Gilbert? ¿Te gusto? ¿Quieres que te bese?
-¿Quieres que haga más?
-Eres realmente sumiso, ¿sabias eso, Jeremy?
-Si hubiera sabido que el sexo te callaría, hubiera intentado esto hace meses.
-¿Quieres tener sexo conmigo?
-
In spanish, unless you are talking to some authority, you almost never say the word 'usted' I mean, you. And, if you are talking to an equal, you said 'tu' or 'vos' depends on the country (in Spain its the 'tu' and in my country 'vos').
Anyway, very cute and hot (;P) chapter.

Kiss!
3/24/2011 c29 1cole el diabolos
So I read all the one shots of this collection and i like them all. Sorry that i didnt review every fiction, but i can't wait to read the next and the next and the next...

So I'm writing here and say thx for updating and writing.

I like it very much.

Can I write you a story wish?

When you've got enough ideas ignor me ^^
1/11/2011 c25 asm613
"You know what you were saying this morning?" Jeremy nodded his head, he also remembered chanting 'Me, Me, ME!' in his head over and over again,

-

This part was very funny. Nice story telling. Thanks for sharing.
1/6/2011 c22 csifan1
Really liked this one.Could you do a bunch of these,but with Damon and Jeremy.These are quite thoughtful but I am just not into werewolves as I am into vampires.
12/24/2010 c29 5fire dragonheart
Nice
12/20/2010 c29 606Ghostwriter
Great job. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side.
12/18/2010 c29 Forevertheshipper
loving this story :) plz update soon
12/17/2010 c29 primavera15
oh my god i got confused for a second! XD i thought it was a good idea for you to do the same version for both of these! they are both great couples! thankies!
12/17/2010 c29 29MysticalKC
Loved It! :D
12/13/2010 c28 primavera15
sorry damon! though you don't know what you missed :) jeremy rocks! thanks for another wonderful chappie!
12/12/2010 c27 4Toulip Fontana
Oh my gosh, how sad! That ending was so emotional- but I loved it! :) :)
12/12/2010 c28 5fire dragonheart
nice
12/12/2010 c28 606Ghostwriter
Nicely done. I love it. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side.
12/12/2010 c28 29MysticalKC
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA READ MORE! :D
12/12/2010 c16 5Vesuvious
Laughed my ass off when Aunt Jenna piped in at the end.
140 Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service