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11/24/2013 c2 Dave123125665452
I can't help but feel that chapter one and chapter two are about as related as dead baby jokes and a maternity ward! Not a bad story, gave me a semi... kinda think it would have been a raging stonker if I had known what in the hell was going on with Bakura's smirk... plus it was a touch short...
11/24/2013 c1 1Kuriboh-hair-FTW
I recommend you spell check your work or get a beta, the spelling mistakes are very confusing and even make your title misleading.

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