for The Wedding11/22/2010 c1 
29immakingmyownluck
OKay! so... AHMAZING! i loved it! the beginning was beautiful. i loved the connection between Gibbs and Ziva! it sounded really good and i loved it! ( dead Serious!) then the actuall wedding was great! i can see Tony's smiled from here! :) great job! PLease please write more! i begg you...(and i dont beg just anyone!)
~imakemyownluck!
29immakingmyownluckOKay! so... AHMAZING! i loved it! the beginning was beautiful. i loved the connection between Gibbs and Ziva! it sounded really good and i loved it! ( dead Serious!) then the actuall wedding was great! i can see Tony's smiled from here! :) great job! PLease please write more! i begg you...(and i dont beg just anyone!)
~imakemyownluck!
10/20/2010 c1 Betherzz
cute little story... lots of love and happiness ;)
might want to fix this part though :
The wedding was very large, just close family and friends.
shouldnt not be in front of very here?
if it was very large it would not just be close family and friends...
cute little story... lots of love and happiness ;)
might want to fix this part though :
The wedding was very large, just close family and friends.
shouldnt not be in front of very here?
if it was very large it would not just be close family and friends...
10/19/2010 c1 Anonymous
That was a great story.
That was a great story.
10/19/2010 c1 NilesLover101
Waaaaaaake up! Haha I was just going along with your full house intro :) that was a good story, very cute and sweet. That's the way I wanted each of the characters' lives and stuff to work out. And then they had to go and kill Jenny...ugh :( anyway nice job on the story :)
Waaaaaaake up! Haha I was just going along with your full house intro :) that was a good story, very cute and sweet. That's the way I wanted each of the characters' lives and stuff to work out. And then they had to go and kill Jenny...ugh :( anyway nice job on the story :)