3/28/2012 c8 sneha
girl you got me hooked to your stories like no one else please continue ur so good at it

1/16/2012 c7 2CarlisleAndBella'sLove
i'm liking this story so much!

i really hope you update soon :D

i also really would like for Emma to be Rosalie's daughter,that would be awesome! :D

x

10/30/2011 c6 SU
KEEP WRITING!

7/3/2011 c6 shailie nieves
:OO oh snap! what am i ganna do to seth? oh craaaccckkkheeaaaddd! lol cant wait for the next update!:)

4/26/2011 c5 shailie nieves
omg! im so sorry i havent reviewed in a while! D: i've been super duper busy and havent had anytime at all to do much of ANY READING! i just read chapter five and i loved it! i cant wait to hear from emma! i'll be sure to keep up with the reading this time! lol much love~ shailie nieves

4/2/2011 c5 9FallenBleedingAngel
O.O please write more i beg you ! i can't wait for the next chapter !

1/27/2011 c1 heatlmo
Great story Dommie. Very creative. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I would like to hear more from the authors perspective rather than dialog from the characters. For example; the story is created in Alice's POV. Who is describing the little girl, Alice or the author? I got a bit lost in there during her description. If you break up the paragraphs, I believe it might be clearer to understand as well as allow the reader to follow along with the development of your characters and their interaction with one another.

Please write another and another. I'm hooked.

As for Jessavi's review.

While I apppreciate your direction and critique, she is only 13 and has not yet had ample time to exercise her creative writing skills, as I mentioned, she is 13.

I would appreciate it, as would others I believe if you would limit your reviews to only mild constructive criticism and elaborate with any praise that may cross your mind. This site is not an SAT tutorial nor a forum to cast judgement on one's lack of experience as a uber polished writer. Thank you