for Harry Potter and the Colonel7/17/2012 c1 Guest
OMG IT THIS HAS MALFOY IN IT OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG HAHAHAHA LOL
OMG IT THIS HAS MALFOY IN IT OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG HAHAHAHA LOL
9/19/2011 c1 Sinon Shihouin
please start writing more on this story i would love too see it continued 8-)
please start writing more on this story i would love too see it continued 8-)
4/5/2011 c1 
19ImaginationPlayground
is this going to be gay?...sorry if its like super obvious or its like a hell no kind of deal
19ImaginationPlaygroundis this going to be gay?...sorry if its like super obvious or its like a hell no kind of deal
1/4/2011 c1 Riliel
Hm, good idea. Have yet to see this couple elsewhere, and it seems like a good couple. By Lucifer, Jason is so hot as the colonel. But, hey, gonna continue? Or even finish the chapter? Please?
Hm, good idea. Have yet to see this couple elsewhere, and it seems like a good couple. By Lucifer, Jason is so hot as the colonel. But, hey, gonna continue? Or even finish the chapter? Please?
10/31/2010 c1 anon0m0us
to edit you go into "Document manager" find this chapter and click "edit". This is a good idea although this chapter is quite short it turned out alright, this being your first story. you spelled weasel wrong it is "weasel" not "weasle" the rest of your spelling and grammar seems to be okay. Good luck if you decide to continue this story I'll look out for another chapter. :D
to edit you go into "Document manager" find this chapter and click "edit". This is a good idea although this chapter is quite short it turned out alright, this being your first story. you spelled weasel wrong it is "weasel" not "weasle" the rest of your spelling and grammar seems to be okay. Good luck if you decide to continue this story I'll look out for another chapter. :D