
5/11/2013 c1
14nimagine
OMG AHHHH! This story is freaking brilliant and loverly. Your characterization is perfect in every way. Seriously, it's just perfect. All of it. And the plot is engaging in the extreme! I am so invested in this already, and this is only the first chapter! It seems you haven't updated in a very long time, however, but I'll favorite this anyway because it's just that amazing. If it's not too much trouble, could you continue this? :D This is my all-time favourite Mary story now!

OMG AHHHH! This story is freaking brilliant and loverly. Your characterization is perfect in every way. Seriously, it's just perfect. All of it. And the plot is engaging in the extreme! I am so invested in this already, and this is only the first chapter! It seems you haven't updated in a very long time, however, but I'll favorite this anyway because it's just that amazing. If it's not too much trouble, could you continue this? :D This is my all-time favourite Mary story now!
3/20/2011 c1
7MuseOfOrpheus
This is a perfectly good beginning! It has a lot of potential, and it sounds like it can end up being very interesting. I don't know if you're going to continue on with this, but I hope you do, and know that your writing is very good. You shold keep on writing!

This is a perfectly good beginning! It has a lot of potential, and it sounds like it can end up being very interesting. I don't know if you're going to continue on with this, but I hope you do, and know that your writing is very good. You shold keep on writing!
1/20/2011 c1
6millernumber1
How nice. I do wish it weren't quite so obvious in canon that Mary died...but it's not explicit, so I always just pretend she didn't. You write her very well, and if you have time, I hope you get around to adding to the intriguing promise here!

How nice. I do wish it weren't quite so obvious in canon that Mary died...but it's not explicit, so I always just pretend she didn't. You write her very well, and if you have time, I hope you get around to adding to the intriguing promise here!
10/30/2010 c1
25Spockologist
*wide eyed* Oh no! Watson! My favorite!
I love Mary. Her voice is so clear and I love the way you write her, it's very belivable.
Can't wait for more!

*wide eyed* Oh no! Watson! My favorite!
I love Mary. Her voice is so clear and I love the way you write her, it's very belivable.
Can't wait for more!
10/27/2010 c1 Anne London
Wow, great start! I hope you will continue this story very soon, I like it very mich! Bye ^_^
Wow, great start! I hope you will continue this story very soon, I like it very mich! Bye ^_^
10/24/2010 c1
61mrspencil
Hello!
This is an interesting angle . Your Mary seems very in character and I am enjoying her perspective on events as they unfold . Her understanding of the relationship between the three of them is thoughtfully conveyed. I look forward to the next chapter. Nicely done :)
Mrs P:)

Hello!
This is an interesting angle . Your Mary seems very in character and I am enjoying her perspective on events as they unfold . Her understanding of the relationship between the three of them is thoughtfully conveyed. I look forward to the next chapter. Nicely done :)
Mrs P:)
10/23/2010 c1
4Go Outside
Wonderful start. I am looking forward to seeing what you have planned for the next chapter. Thanks.

Wonderful start. I am looking forward to seeing what you have planned for the next chapter. Thanks.