10/27/2014 c4 Aaronna
*sobs quietly* This is beautiful, thank you for sharing it.
*sobs quietly* This is beautiful, thank you for sharing it.
3/18/2014 c4 34AJsRandom
I really like how you've treated this subject. The show never said a word about it- like BAM! And he's all better. Like magic, lol! In reality, grief is a long process with many steps, and the experience differs for everyone! I wrote a fic myself where I altered the end of 2.9- he tells Arthur what's wrong. This fic here could follow right after that one. :). Thanks for sharing!
I really like how you've treated this subject. The show never said a word about it- like BAM! And he's all better. Like magic, lol! In reality, grief is a long process with many steps, and the experience differs for everyone! I wrote a fic myself where I altered the end of 2.9- he tells Arthur what's wrong. This fic here could follow right after that one. :). Thanks for sharing!
3/6/2014 c4 638annie81
Like an hourglass throwing away time
The discription of Freya snatching the boat/coming out of the water. How did you cram so much beauty into one chapter?
Like an hourglass throwing away time
The discription of Freya snatching the boat/coming out of the water. How did you cram so much beauty into one chapter?
3/6/2014 c3 8annie81
...If you can leave a fake chapter I can leave a fake reveiw. So there. You feel so cheated, don't you? I bet you do.
\\\\\ Im such a geek.
...If you can leave a fake chapter I can leave a fake reveiw. So there. You feel so cheated, don't you? I bet you do.
\\\\\ Im such a geek.
3/23/2012 c4 22bluespiritgal
So beautifully written. Tanks. A lovely but sad read. Merlin really does wear his heart on his sleeve.
So beautifully written. Tanks. A lovely but sad read. Merlin really does wear his heart on his sleeve.
10/24/2011 c2 10Lady Willamina
This was written with so much feeling and i really enjoyed it. There is definately more that needed to be covered regarding Merlin's pain after Freya's death. You did this very beautifully in this chapter. I am hoping the next chapter will let him find a way to come to terms with it more.
This was written with so much feeling and i really enjoyed it. There is definately more that needed to be covered regarding Merlin's pain after Freya's death. You did this very beautifully in this chapter. I am hoping the next chapter will let him find a way to come to terms with it more.
5/8/2011 c4 1Ithebooklover
Wow, I cried while reading this, this is the first time I've cried for this reason while reading a fanfic...
Wow, I cried while reading this, this is the first time I've cried for this reason while reading a fanfic...
1/23/2011 c4 70Whirlwind421
Awesome! That was so sad! Wow, you really showed his emotions beautifully! You are an awesome writer!
Awesome! That was so sad! Wow, you really showed his emotions beautifully! You are an awesome writer!
12/29/2010 c4 Guest
that was a really beautiful story :') got tears in my eyes :')
that was a really beautiful story :') got tears in my eyes :')
12/18/2010 c3 25Fantasyfan4ever
Oh my... words can not even begin to describe my thoughts on this lovely, sensational chapter. You do a great job in conveying Merlin's emotions, and the ending is so bittersweet. It totally ties in with the season 3 finale... which didn't have enough M/F! D: Anyways, no worries about the delay; all that matters is that you updated the fic. I hope to read your other fics in the future, and the new one sounds interesting. Well done!
Oh my... words can not even begin to describe my thoughts on this lovely, sensational chapter. You do a great job in conveying Merlin's emotions, and the ending is so bittersweet. It totally ties in with the season 3 finale... which didn't have enough M/F! D: Anyways, no worries about the delay; all that matters is that you updated the fic. I hope to read your other fics in the future, and the new one sounds interesting. Well done!
12/18/2010 c3 Guest
Oh my goodness, I am in tears! This is amazing!
Oh my goodness, I am in tears! This is amazing!