for At Your Service7/13/2012 c1 
6Catiedidit
Well hell! Great start! I really hope you continue with this. Its a great premise, and I look forward to some role reversal.
6CatiediditWell hell! Great start! I really hope you continue with this. Its a great premise, and I look forward to some role reversal.
1/28/2011 c1 TwiTudorPlumAusten Reader
I think this could be a wonderful story! I really hope you keep up with it!
I think this could be a wonderful story! I really hope you keep up with it!
11/8/2010 c1 1Twilightisluv
OH MRS HOTTIE*WINKS* Rosie likes! but atlass iam sorry i cant bring my self to read the B and J *shudders*
1TwilightisluvOH MRS HOTTIE*WINKS* Rosie likes! but atlass iam sorry i cant bring my self to read the B and J *shudders*
11/2/2010 c1 bellamarie1976
I think you have a great start to a great story I hope you update it real soon!
I think you have a great start to a great story I hope you update it real soon!
10/25/2010 c1 belanded
I'll pass. Not the biggest fan of Edward will never get over his dead wife stories. I don't get them. They never work because Bella is always inferior to them and it is obvious he'll never truly love her. It is always Edward, Bella never has someone she truly loved before Edward. Seriously, couldn't the children have been hers that she had with a man she loved? I don't get the double standard that Bella can't love anyone besides Edward. Also, what is it with Kate? I barely remember her from the books. Isn't her power to shock vampires? If that is her power, then she wasn't a very good person during her life. I don't understand why she is such a why she is always Edwards love. Poor Carmen, God forbid Edward is with someone with Moorish blood. Oh, Mia Maestro. You are too talented for a glorified cameo.
I'll pass. Not the biggest fan of Edward will never get over his dead wife stories. I don't get them. They never work because Bella is always inferior to them and it is obvious he'll never truly love her. It is always Edward, Bella never has someone she truly loved before Edward. Seriously, couldn't the children have been hers that she had with a man she loved? I don't get the double standard that Bella can't love anyone besides Edward. Also, what is it with Kate? I barely remember her from the books. Isn't her power to shock vampires? If that is her power, then she wasn't a very good person during her life. I don't understand why she is such a why she is always Edwards love. Poor Carmen, God forbid Edward is with someone with Moorish blood. Oh, Mia Maestro. You are too talented for a glorified cameo.