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1/10/2011 c5 x-Pick'n'Mix-x
Wow! Thi is such a brilliant story. I love the characters in it :) please update really soon :D
1/10/2011 c5 10Superdani4Ever
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THE CHAPTER!

Sherlock made the transition from sleeping to waking gradually and gently-WOW!who knew?

aww,they're sooooooo cute!

He wasn't sure what name to give this relationship, though-ohhhhhhhh,really?

"And words like 'girlfriend' and 'boyfriend' sound too frivolous and dull for you to feel comfortable with."-WHAT?

yeah,I don't like it
1/2/2011 c4 2AAKK47
WOW.

I love this fic so far, the oc is well thoughtout and has a personality (thank goodness, i hate a mary-sue). The fic generally is well writen and although you haven't writen a mystery it still has an interesting plot (which i have found does not often happen in this fandom, for some reason)

This chapter particularly was well written, especially considering it is your first attempt.

I sincerely look forward to the next chapter and to seeing what happens next!

Amelli-Kara

:)
12/29/2010 c4 xxxxx456
Wow first time and you picked to do it for Sherlock, he's not as easy person to do. But i think you did it wonderfully and i like you story very much :)
12/11/2010 c2 saph-kira33
I like this story and incredibly more-so I like her, she's got spunk, the ability to keep up without stealing the show or replacing any original characters and a general good impact on the story yay for successful oc creation ( granted I don't read many fics with oc's cause you can tell their make and the way the plots going to roll from the summary which consistantly bores me, but yours is different and well constructed so well done)
12/7/2010 c4 2xxkissesandcuddlesxx
i love this chappie ;) hope u keep writingxx
12/6/2010 c4 10Superdani4Ever
thanks for the new chapter! :)

"If I admit that you were right, will you go away?" -lol!

The feel of her body made it difficult to concentrate on much else-that's news for him

For once, thinking was actually the boring alternative-WOW!

"But it's the first time I've cared about the outcome."-awwww,cute!

I suspect you're going to approach this with the same single-minded focus and attention to detail you apply to everything else-yeah...I don't think so

She understood him, and maybe that would be enough-ADORABLE!

It was all her fault, he was sure of it-oh,poor Sherlock ;)

There may need to be other lessons-riiiiiiiight,wink,wink ;)

This was a great chapter!
11/16/2010 c3 3bitemebeezlebub
I think you characterized Sherlock quite well...and I'm very appreciative of you actually taking time to characterize Seona, rather than just throwing a random girl in there for him to fall in love with. excited for what happens next!
11/13/2010 c3 10Superdani4Ever
our Mr Holmes-awww,that’s so sweet!

there were still some areas where he was woefully under-informed-oh really?I didn’t noticed,lol!

"And if I said that I was interested in... a relationship?"-OMG!

It’s official,I’m in love with this story!

"I'm not an easy man to know,"-never realized that,hehe

Update soon pleeeeeeeeease!
11/13/2010 c2 Superdani4Ever
poor girl,I only hope that she can recover now.

And Sherlock MAKES A MOVE!
11/13/2010 c1 Superdani4Ever
I liked it!

just hope she doesn't die :(
11/9/2010 c3 Chaka-demus
Congrats on #3!

Many people seem to falter and write a very out of character(in my opinion) sherlock when he is portrayed in a romantic relationship either with an OC or another character but here you seem to have avoided that trend(thankfuly;)

I'm exited to see them progresse throughout the story.

I'll be checking for an update soon *fingers crossed*:D

Cheers
11/7/2010 c3 Ceville
EEEH AN UPDATE! YAY! :D

And what an update too~

Haha, I especially like the part with 'Our Mr. Holmes' and the ending. Seona asking John about Sherlock's love-life? Go girl! xD

Ahh, this is just what I felt like doing after finishing my math exam. Reading a story. Updates make the world go round!

Anyhoo- I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
10/29/2010 c2 cosmosalchemist
will you update? please update
10/29/2010 c2 Chaka-demus
ah! I was wondering if the second chapter would be has good as the first(which it is ;)Very nicely put together so far.Hope to see more soon.
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