
11/16/2024 c31
1KaiKaiRee
aw. you took out the whole "virus controlling his suit" schtick. can i ask why?

aw. you took out the whole "virus controlling his suit" schtick. can i ask why?
10/2/2024 c4 DarkChampion
This is probably my 3rd read of this. I recently watched the jack reacher series, it's now how I am picturing John. Only John is taller, and bigger. But generally the same looking.
This is probably my 3rd read of this. I recently watched the jack reacher series, it's now how I am picturing John. Only John is taller, and bigger. But generally the same looking.
6/23/2024 c43
2CR GRZ
I loved the story, I would have loved to watch some chapters imagining the pregnant man and even acting with his daughter, being a tough Spartan

I loved the story, I would have loved to watch some chapters imagining the pregnant man and even acting with his daughter, being a tough Spartan
6/10/2024 c43 Lola
This was a delight beautiful fic. I love every moment of it. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us to read.
This was a delight beautiful fic. I love every moment of it. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us to read.
6/10/2024 c34 Guest
Aww their first kiss was so cute and perfect I loved it.
Aww their first kiss was so cute and perfect I loved it.
6/10/2024 c33 Lola
Oh gosh. I really didn't think she was going to tell him like that damn. Oh gabby. She is just too good and sweet and dealing with sooo much.
Oh gosh. I really didn't think she was going to tell him like that damn. Oh gabby. She is just too good and sweet and dealing with sooo much.
6/10/2024 c31 Lola
I am soooooo upset she was kidnapped. But also she is such a badass I love her. I'm sad about poor Ryan and I hope boomer and the horses are okay. very invested though. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I am soooooo upset she was kidnapped. But also she is such a badass I love her. I'm sad about poor Ryan and I hope boomer and the horses are okay. very invested though. I can't wait to see what happens next.
6/10/2024 c22 Lola
His smile! He saw his bestie and the love of his life and he smiled! I am soooo so soooo unwell. I loved this chapter so much. The chess set that John made! Everything about Arbiter. Alll phenomenal.
His smile! He saw his bestie and the love of his life and he smiled! I am soooo so soooo unwell. I loved this chapter so much. The chess set that John made! Everything about Arbiter. Alll phenomenal.
6/10/2024 c21 Guest
Poor gabby just can't make good first impressions on war heroes lmao. But also I would probably say that she can make great first impressions. The arbitar saw she was down to fight and was probably like ohhh yes perfect woman for my bff John
Poor gabby just can't make good first impressions on war heroes lmao. But also I would probably say that she can make great first impressions. The arbitar saw she was down to fight and was probably like ohhh yes perfect woman for my bff John
6/10/2024 c9 Lola
Her uncle being kirk18 omggggggg. I'm shook. I also adore seeing John with the horses it makes sense he would connect with them.
Her uncle being kirk18 omggggggg. I'm shook. I also adore seeing John with the horses it makes sense he would connect with them.
6/9/2024 c8 Lola
I love seeing them get closer together!
I love seeing them get closer together!
6/9/2024 c6 Lola
Oh I adored this chapter! The hand signals! Their conversations ! John. It understanding the bad attempt at flirting. All of it was great. I loved how Gabby stood in and can read him so well.
Oh I adored this chapter! The hand signals! Their conversations ! John. It understanding the bad attempt at flirting. All of it was great. I loved how Gabby stood in and can read him so well.
6/9/2024 c4 Lola
Omg I honestly did not expect any Cortana appearances. Wild. Also damn John so strong and he fixed things for her !? I am crying.
Omg I honestly did not expect any Cortana appearances. Wild. Also damn John so strong and he fixed things for her !? I am crying.
6/9/2024 c3 Lola
This is so great. I love all the little details. John being so quiet and wearing the same clothes but clean. It's all sooooo good. They're both very charming
This is so great. I love all the little details. John being so quiet and wearing the same clothes but clean. It's all sooooo good. They're both very charming
6/9/2024 c2 Lola
My bestie recommended this fic to me since it's one of her favorites. I can already see why. I can't wait to keep reading.
My bestie recommended this fic to me since it's one of her favorites. I can already see why. I can't wait to keep reading.