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2/6/2019 c9 4Blackbelt219
It’s a good story but I feel like it’s going a bit slow
2/6/2019 c1 Ian
That summary really didn't need an explanation. .
2/5/2019 c32 ginny59
Fascinating!
1/31/2019 c33 Klover Parker
Truly enjoyed your story and hope you update soon.
1/30/2019 c33 Stone Cooper
Thank you, I admitted have not looked to stories that I've marked until recently. I am glad that you have been able to start writing again. I know that it is often hard to find the time and or the focus needed to fall into the world of words you are creating, I keep getting distracted with World Building or running into a new idea.

I really enjoyed the new three chapters I found and hope that RL permits you to post again when ever that is, but if not I am happy with what you have posted, though adore the Characters and your take on Harry Potter and this type of story. So again Thank you.
1/24/2019 c6 Hadesworld
“Power is to have, not to use it”
This is backwards, power should be used, but wisely so. Power is not positive or negative, it is the entente on how you use it. Make sure you have power, it is what makes you and helps you. Power of will, choice, emotion, spirit, magic, instinct, martial arts, philosophy, action, weapons, empires, military, torture, self, strategy, education, knowledge, wisdom, compassion, etc... You NEED power to live, but to abandon that power is almost as bad as using it badly or inadequately.
1/22/2019 c7 Chestnut Zahard
I really must stop reading for a moment to leave you a review praising you for that remarkable bit of poetry. I found it both beautifully eloquent and very cleverly integrated.
1/22/2019 c33 boo23
So...wow! I was lucky enough to stumble upon this fic last week and spent the last couple days completely unproductive and read the whole story to date. It’s brilliant. What an amazing and full alternative universe you have created. You character s are wonderful and have depth and uniqueness. I really can’t wait to read more. Fantastic job!
1/16/2019 c23 N. A. Wennerholm
The numbers remind me too much about the concentration camps of world war two. And I have met some of the survivors and they had numbers tattooed on their wrists.

And Filch is a real piece of work. And he treats all students like shit. Squib or not that man should be fired and thrown out of the Castel and never allowed a Job that has anything to do with Children. Plus I feel Rather than bottling up his feelings and History he should tell or show everything. Such a pensive that can act like a movie projector so everyone can watch Students and Staff alike. Then Make a copy and make the Entire Ministry for Magic and the Wizengamot Watch. So they can learn that Harry had a very hard life. And that there are both good and bad none magicals. While at the same time show That the Wizarding world isn't any better in the way many treat others. Hopefully treating them About what true humility and respect are. And that respect is earned not given. And that people need to work hard to keep it once earned.
1/16/2019 c19 N. A. Wennerholm
This is one time that I feel that Harry's Parents should have had a second set of Harry's Papers in the Family Vaults. Even though Harry Can't access most of the Vaults Maybe The one trusted Goblin for whom Harry views as an Uncle to go retrieve and Make copies of the Documents to help Harry in Regaining his Identity.
1/16/2019 c21 N. A. Wennerholm
As for Flitwick, I think with Harry could view the man as both another honorary uncle and mentor.

But yet at the same time, I would like to see Harry point out what he sees wrong with the Wizarding World and how they treat each others with regards to non-human magic users and each other especially those disgusting bigoted purebloods. Because there are issues that are not right. Such as enslaving others which is wrong plain and simple. Plus Slavery is against the Law in Great Britain. And from what I remember of my history classes Think of three different nations and the order in which they outlawed slavery.
1. France
2. Great Britain
3. The United States.

This the Wizarding world is breaking the law dealing with Slavery and whether they want to acknowledge it or not they are still Accountable to the Crown and Parliament and the Prime Minister.
1/16/2019 c15 N. A. Wennerholm
Families like the Malfoys should be stripped of their magic.
If only an individual bigot them too. Such people have the attitude of being better than others. And anyone who's in power and a bigot have a habit of abusing that power. Many ethnic-racial groups have been wiped out by such people in genocide. Plus there is what is called classism referencing where those with a lot of money are never satisfied and only want more and too often treat those who have less money than themselves like shit. And many if they had their way they wouldn't pay them for their labor and services they would rather enslave them. I ran into such people and overheard them and I remember reading some journals from some of my ancestors including entries in my family genealogies and what read situated me as it did the person who wrote it. They were exposing their colleagues and their views and plans. Such as the bankers. And many business owners if extreme wealth.
1/15/2019 c2 N. A. Wennerholm
I know there is still more to this Story. But I was thinking that maybe Harry can set up a Charitable Foundation to help fund the Orphanage maybe even expand it so it can house even more children And maybe even hire more people to help care for the kids. Maybe even arrange for the orphanage to know about magic and even keep an eye out for more magical orphans.
1/15/2019 c2 N. A. Wennerholm
globins should be goblins.
1/14/2019 c33 joy.rolo
I'm quite sad and disappointed that Professor Sprout has taken Dumbledore's advice to be careful of Harry to heart :( Would've loved to see Sprout have more of an impact on Harry..positive that is
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