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1/12/2019 c33 Guest
I really love this story! I’ve read very few fanfics that were so well put together with an original plot. I anxiously await your next update.
-Fellow writer who is more than impressed (you should really write a novel)
1/7/2019 c33 Loquin
WoW!, very good chapter!, so Harry is slowly opening to the adults, interesting!
Keep the good job!
1/6/2019 c32 G Fawkes
Ok. It just happened again, and I have to say something. Frank refers to 'the last time some orphan from the muggle world had alot of power ' (para).
No one except Dumbles knows who Tom Ridle grew up to become. He disappeared after Borgin and Burke's, at say 19 or 20, and came back to start a War at approximately SIXTY years old.
As all good little Victorian era stuck in time magicals do, Frank will have married at 18,and ad kids, n heir and a spare, imediatley. He is only thirty, now. Frank has no effnig CLUE who Tom Riddle is!
1/4/2019 c33 00
Update please.

Good stories are rare.
1/4/2019 c28 G Fawkes
Changing Canon just because you think it ought to be changed is, well, (besides annoying, and aggravating, and it pissed me off) pretty much the entire point of fanfiction.
Doesn't mean I have to like it, so ppppttttttpppppttttt (raspberry)
1/4/2019 c27 G F
These rules and who they are coming from... surely I'm not the only one having a problem. Sully is nice, and taught him to survive, but Sullivan was the abusive, ass that that ran the orphanage?! Two different people? And WHO is Matt?
1/3/2019 c25 G Fawkes
Good thing I'm not trying to print a chapter and take it home to read, like I used when ffn started. The a/n's would MORE than a whole page if I did!
Seriously... None of this crap has any place out in the 'public' pages. Do that #$&! in private if you want.

Story is good. Don't get me wrong. It's the blatant d""k measuring I can't stand.
1/1/2019 c16 G F
Awwwwww! Sevvy was nice. (Sniff)
1/1/2019 c13 GF
Why would 'the Levitation spell' (incantation- wingsrdium leviosa)(the incantation- is not the name) be the very first lesson, when in Canon it was on Halloween... The lesson that upset Hermione and sent her crying to the troll bathroom. Two lessons a week, eight weeks till Halloween. That's Iike, lesson sixteen.
The problem is- Canon doesn't cover that first ever lesson in charms, and the first time we see that class IS Halloween.

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"He put on his jumpers (sweaters, plural, in the UK)? and a shirt... And then his school uniform (which consists of trousers (pants are underwear) a white dress shirt, house tie, and robes, plus black leather dress shoes. Trying here, but... wtf?
Must be the beta's fault?
Maybe you thought jumpers were trainers (shoes)? IDK.
1/1/2019 c12 GF
If it ain't in the fic body, it doesn't exist. Fix the story, don't just write an author note. Out of 950 some fics I read at least once, I may have conciously read an a/n - ten times?
1/1/2019 c9 G Fawkes
Oh... And I know the fic police aren't what they were ten years ago, but WAAAAAYYYYY too much a/ns going on. Quit counting your reviews, write your fic, it's not a contest.

And yes, if I could travel back in time, I would kill off anyone involved in starting up a social media company.
1/1/2019 c9 G Fawkes
I think you have a Harry story that can stand alone, without adding a "someone else is the boy who lived". Almost like, once he appears, you have to go back and give Him nine chapters of background before they can get on the train and progress from there.
So... I'm not really looking forward to all this "boy who lived is not Harry"- er, stuff.
12/31/2018 c2 G Fawkes
Some friend. The little Goblin buddy COULD take Harry in for an inheritance test, and give him access to a bunch of vaults...and a crapload of GOLD. But noooooooo.
12/31/2018 c2 G Fawkes
I am probably considered old in fic land. In my early fifties, from Ohio, USA, Caucasian, and did three years of college, but didn't finish. About as out of touch and boring as millennials, Y gens, and X gens can imagine. Last, tail end of the Baby boom, woohoo!
I don't get this 'char', or 'kai' thing. Is that some Euro trend , or have I missed some shift stateside? Nicknames or abbreviated monikers in my mind are first syllable- Rick, Ricky, Mike, Mick, Mikey, Mickey, etc. What is with the SECOND syllable bit?
In, well, fifty three years - I have NEVER heard of 'char' being used for Richard, and can't even concieve of Michael being twisted into 'kai'. It baffles.

Uh, good story, so far, though!
12/29/2018 c33 2lepidus
very well written story, the character development is remarkable and i find that your storytelling skills rival harry's. it is refreshing to read about these new characters and events, ways of solving canon problems that most authors like to brush over or avoid altogether. i'm excited to read more, though i apologize for not having found this till a few days ago. i will certainly review every further chapter, and based on the progression of your writing abilities so far, i'm sure they'll be very interesting. good luck, and thanks for the writing so far!
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