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11/24/2010 c1 4StarVix
First off, an official review: Your story is interesting even though I know squat about Halo, although it would be nice if you started more paragraphs every now and again so there wouldn't be huge blocks of information without a break; those strain the eyes after awhile. Other than that, an interesting fiction.

OK, I would have PM'd you for this, but your PMs are disabled: In response to your question, so long as you keep the story rated K (K+ if there is a lot of violence) and do not use bad language or adult situations, you have my permission to do whatever you would like with my story ideas and characters. Knock yourself out. ^-^

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