for Discern and Perceive2/18 c14 Pokadot5
Getting back into reading about my otp now the freedom movie is out in japan. Will eagerly await for the next chapter
Getting back into reading about my otp now the freedom movie is out in japan. Will eagerly await for the next chapter
8/1/2022 c14 Yula
I can’t wait to read the continuation!
I can’t wait to read the continuation!
6/22/2020 c14 jezz21
This is so good. I hope the author will give this a chance. I love how you uniquely portray each character. The progress of the story is superb. That's why i'm craving for more. Seriously hoping that you'll eventually decided to continye this beautiful story.
This is so good. I hope the author will give this a chance. I love how you uniquely portray each character. The progress of the story is superb. That's why i'm craving for more. Seriously hoping that you'll eventually decided to continye this beautiful story.
11/23/2018 c14 PegasusInCage
Cagalli and Patrick conversation makes me think if there's no Coordinator and Natural in GS or Patrick didn't hate Natural maybe Cagalli and Patrick would get along...
It's really a great story btw, I don't know why I didn't find it earlier. This story such a represent of GSD but with normal daily life story one (I mean no Coordinator and Natural). I like how Cagalli seems dominating their relationship, Cagalli who always makes the move first haha, and deciding things too. Just like in GSD Athrun looks so powerless... I really wanna know how the story goes when Cagalli back in ORB, tbh I want Athrun give up his job and tailing her instead of Cagalli... I hope you will comeback and continue this great work
Cagalli and Patrick conversation makes me think if there's no Coordinator and Natural in GS or Patrick didn't hate Natural maybe Cagalli and Patrick would get along...
It's really a great story btw, I don't know why I didn't find it earlier. This story such a represent of GSD but with normal daily life story one (I mean no Coordinator and Natural). I like how Cagalli seems dominating their relationship, Cagalli who always makes the move first haha, and deciding things too. Just like in GSD Athrun looks so powerless... I really wanna know how the story goes when Cagalli back in ORB, tbh I want Athrun give up his job and tailing her instead of Cagalli... I hope you will comeback and continue this great work
11/22/2018 c11 PegasusInCage
I really love this part! when Kira found out on video call that his newly found sister show up from his best friend's bedroom ! especially the last part! haha
I really love this part! when Kira found out on video call that his newly found sister show up from his best friend's bedroom ! especially the last part! haha
12/30/2017 c13 
7CS Fitzgerald
they resemble such a genuine couple, going between moments of longing and desire to these incredibly sweet tender moments where they realize how much they mean to each other. its truly amazing how well you've depicted this, and how you've paced this story in such a steady, engaging way. i've never felt bored reading this. please do continue!
7CS Fitzgeraldthey resemble such a genuine couple, going between moments of longing and desire to these incredibly sweet tender moments where they realize how much they mean to each other. its truly amazing how well you've depicted this, and how you've paced this story in such a steady, engaging way. i've never felt bored reading this. please do continue!
12/30/2017 c5 CS Fitzgerald
i like how nervous he is when asking her out. all the characters seem so accurate to how they were in the show - cagalli being fiery, athrun being awkward at times, kira being endearing, etc. you're a talented writer, my friend!
i like how nervous he is when asking her out. all the characters seem so accurate to how they were in the show - cagalli being fiery, athrun being awkward at times, kira being endearing, etc. you're a talented writer, my friend!
12/28/2017 c14 CS Fitzgerald
i know you stated the story would only be about 18-20 chapters. please do consider finishing it - this is the best story here!
i know you stated the story would only be about 18-20 chapters. please do consider finishing it - this is the best story here!
9/28/2017 c12 6NocturnaMajora
This story is genius. I can't stop laughing. Litterally chocked on my food several times when Yzak talks to Dearka (the food processor lol.) PLEASE UPDATE. :D
6NocturnaMajoraThis story is genius. I can't stop laughing. Litterally chocked on my food several times when Yzak talks to Dearka (the food processor lol.) PLEASE UPDATE. :D
6/14/2017 c14 Guest
Really an excellent AU fanfic, I can see the evolution of your writing in every chapter. Love this one i cant wait to see how they will manage. Maybe we will see an athrun in the beach soon?
3 Please update soon.
Really an excellent AU fanfic, I can see the evolution of your writing in every chapter. Love this one i cant wait to see how they will manage. Maybe we will see an athrun in the beach soon?
3 Please update soon.
3/12/2017 c14 25themirrorminder.372259
Absolutely LOVE this story! It's incredible! You're writing is witty and your characterizations of the characters is super on point! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon :)
25themirrorminder.372259Absolutely LOVE this story! It's incredible! You're writing is witty and your characterizations of the characters is super on point! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon :)
2/26/2017 c14 nattylite
I've loved the story so far! I think you have done well with keeping everyone in character and those are my favorite fanfics to read. Excited to stay with it until it's finished!
I've loved the story so far! I think you have done well with keeping everyone in character and those are my favorite fanfics to read. Excited to stay with it until it's finished!