for Discern and Perceive2/16/2011 c3 
3yamajoANT
Thanks for the update! :DDD
Can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue to write more xD
3yamajoANTThanks for the update! :DDD
Can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue to write more xD
2/15/2011 c1 anonymouse
kay so i just finished reading all three current chapters and all i have to say is this : update update update update update update.. etc..
soo please take my advice and UPDATE as soon as possible! im loving this story and would love to be able to read it all soon. right up until you have la fin. plleeaaaasseee update :D
kay so i just finished reading all three current chapters and all i have to say is this : update update update update update update.. etc..
soo please take my advice and UPDATE as soon as possible! im loving this story and would love to be able to read it all soon. right up until you have la fin. plleeaaaasseee update :D
2/15/2011 c3 2Jodeist
Lol! The asucaga moment is cool^^But Fllay is still a pain in the ass in this story wel, guess she won't change lol^^I hope you will update soon^^
2JodeistLol! The asucaga moment is cool^^But Fllay is still a pain in the ass in this story wel, guess she won't change lol^^I hope you will update soon^^
12/25/2010 c2 11littlemsstrawberry
this is interesting! please update soon! i really am anrgry at kira's parents for the restraining order. poor cagalli
11littlemsstrawberrythis is interesting! please update soon! i really am anrgry at kira's parents for the restraining order. poor cagalli
12/13/2010 c2 2Jodeist
What does Cagalli mean by to slip, and in which death trap? I mean I know she wasn't expecting to meet her brother but well..Could you please answer me! But nice story anyway! PLease update soon^^
2JodeistWhat does Cagalli mean by to slip, and in which death trap? I mean I know she wasn't expecting to meet her brother but well..Could you please answer me! But nice story anyway! PLease update soon^^
11/17/2010 c1 3yamajoANT
Can't wait to see what happens! xD Ahh, the suspense. xD Please write soon! :D
3yamajoANTCan't wait to see what happens! xD Ahh, the suspense. xD Please write soon! :D
10/31/2010 c1 Dhevz
Nice start! :D looking forward to this.
Nice start! :D looking forward to this.
10/29/2010 c1 GS4ever
This sounds sooo interestin! Cnt wait to read more! Keep it up :)
This sounds sooo interestin! Cnt wait to read more! Keep it up :)
10/29/2010 c1 26quintilis
I wouldn't have said anything if there wasn't something about your writing that distinguished this story from the hundreds of other AU Cagalli/Athrun/the gang stories out there, but there is - it's good. I'm used to fragments and missing commas and poor construction, but this is spectacular by standards. Great job! I look forward to the next update.
I've been thinking about starting one of my own A/C chaptered stories lately, but inspiration hasn't struck me. Guess I'm meant to write just oneshots about them!
- Portsmouth
26quintilisI wouldn't have said anything if there wasn't something about your writing that distinguished this story from the hundreds of other AU Cagalli/Athrun/the gang stories out there, but there is - it's good. I'm used to fragments and missing commas and poor construction, but this is spectacular by standards. Great job! I look forward to the next update.
I've been thinking about starting one of my own A/C chaptered stories lately, but inspiration hasn't struck me. Guess I'm meant to write just oneshots about them!
- Portsmouth
10/29/2010 c1 4SamuraiGirl7
Quite a catchy plot you have here. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter and look forward to the rest to come! You have a great writing style and flow to your chapter which really draws the reader into the story. Well done.
4SamuraiGirl7Quite a catchy plot you have here. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter and look forward to the rest to come! You have a great writing style and flow to your chapter which really draws the reader into the story. Well done.
10/29/2010 c1 1cagallifangurl
Hmmm very very interesting o: Poor Cagalli and Kira D: I wonder what happens next? (: Hope u update soon!
1cagallifangurlHmmm very very interesting o: Poor Cagalli and Kira D: I wonder what happens next? (: Hope u update soon!