for I Hear Him Scream10/30/2010 c2 Windsurf
You have a very powerful and captivating way of writing; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
You have a very powerful and captivating way of writing; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
10/30/2010 c2 
3Toothless-the-nightfury
Wow! You don't find many trans fic out there and you have certainly done this one justice.
It's well written, has a decent plot and enough tension to go around... It's great!
My advice though would be to keep the plot as it is now- i mean don't include the gods like some people have, and try not to over-write the plot, that's the biggest fanfic killer out there!
3Toothless-the-nightfuryWow! You don't find many trans fic out there and you have certainly done this one justice.
It's well written, has a decent plot and enough tension to go around... It's great!
My advice though would be to keep the plot as it is now- i mean don't include the gods like some people have, and try not to over-write the plot, that's the biggest fanfic killer out there!
10/29/2010 c2 4Comet Moon
This is different.
Wonder if Hiccup ahs Dragon Magic and human magic as well?
LFTM (Look forward to mroe)
Ja ne
Jim
4Comet MoonThis is different.
Wonder if Hiccup ahs Dragon Magic and human magic as well?
LFTM (Look forward to mroe)
Ja ne
Jim
10/29/2010 c2 ShootMe002
This is going to be Epic!
Sounds like you already have quite a bit planned and written out. Keep up the great work.
This is going to be Epic!
Sounds like you already have quite a bit planned and written out. Keep up the great work.
10/29/2010 c1 5knAngel18
Wow this story is really good so far! I wonder how everyone is going to react to Hiccup being a dragon. Please update soon! I can't wait to read more! :D
5knAngel18Wow this story is really good so far! I wonder how everyone is going to react to Hiccup being a dragon. Please update soon! I can't wait to read more! :D
10/29/2010 c1 ricky147896325
effin' Awesome XDDD
Transformation fanfics are soooo AWESOME XDDDD
Plz continue I can't wait to read what happens next OwO
effin' Awesome XDDD
Transformation fanfics are soooo AWESOME XDDDD
Plz continue I can't wait to read what happens next OwO