for Denver Paranormal Society1/10/2022 c31 traceybuie
Poor Bella is worried about so many more things now. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Poor Bella is worried about so many more things now. Thanks for writing and sharing.
1/10/2022 c31 lamelurker
So glad to see such a wonderful update! Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
So glad to see such a wonderful update! Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
1/10/2022 c31 Adriu
Holaaa
Gracias por el capítulo. Me alegro que a pesar de lo loco que está el mundo puedas seguir escribiendo. Espero que tu familia se recupere. En mi casa estamos todos contagiados y aislados y me emociona leer nuevos capítulos.
Gracias por compartir la historia.
Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador.
Adriu
Holaaa
Gracias por el capítulo. Me alegro que a pesar de lo loco que está el mundo puedas seguir escribiendo. Espero que tu familia se recupere. En mi casa estamos todos contagiados y aislados y me emociona leer nuevos capítulos.
Gracias por compartir la historia.
Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador.
Adriu
1/10/2022 c31 Elisabeth123
Oh please don’t take her powers. It still doesn’t make sense Edward having powers.
Oh please don’t take her powers. It still doesn’t make sense Edward having powers.
1/6/2022 c20 Elisabeth123
How is it that Edward now has powers? That makes no sense. Apart from that I’m loving this so good you’ll finish this soon. Please!
How is it that Edward now has powers? That makes no sense. Apart from that I’m loving this so good you’ll finish this soon. Please!
8/26/2021 c30 mamato
I’d give anything to see this completed! I absolutely love it! Any chance you could give a synopsis of what the ending you envisioned to be just for closure?
Thanks so much for your wonderful writing!
M
I’d give anything to see this completed! I absolutely love it! Any chance you could give a synopsis of what the ending you envisioned to be just for closure?
Thanks so much for your wonderful writing!
M
7/3/2020 c30 Rebecca Rowland
Just wondering... this story is not marked as complete (I almost didn't start reading it as I rarely read one that is not marked as complete - I despise getting into a story only to be left hanging) but this felt like an epilogue/teaser for the next story. Was this an oversight or was there meant to be more for Denver Paranormal Society?
Also, I wanted to add that I really enjoyed the investigation chapters. For about 5 years or more now I've ceased watching television, but I used to enjoy watching the show Ghost Hunters. I liked that they tried to debunk claims of hauntings rather than hype them up like some other 'ghost story' shows (it made it more believable when they WOULD find evidence they couldn't explain away). The investigations you had the DPS doing felt much like theirs but with much more action and a lot less down time. It was fun reading them - especially with Bella's character added!
Just wondering... this story is not marked as complete (I almost didn't start reading it as I rarely read one that is not marked as complete - I despise getting into a story only to be left hanging) but this felt like an epilogue/teaser for the next story. Was this an oversight or was there meant to be more for Denver Paranormal Society?
Also, I wanted to add that I really enjoyed the investigation chapters. For about 5 years or more now I've ceased watching television, but I used to enjoy watching the show Ghost Hunters. I liked that they tried to debunk claims of hauntings rather than hype them up like some other 'ghost story' shows (it made it more believable when they WOULD find evidence they couldn't explain away). The investigations you had the DPS doing felt much like theirs but with much more action and a lot less down time. It was fun reading them - especially with Bella's character added!
7/3/2020 c20 Rebecca Rowland
Just a little head's up on an issue that makes this section of the story a bit confusing... You listed Maggie's mother as Rebecca at first, but at some point switched her name to Rachel. Since Jacob's sisters are named Rebecca and Rachel, it is easy to understand how this may have occurred (plus, you used Rebecca for a character earlier but it was minor - I only noticed because of my own name). ;)
Just a little head's up on an issue that makes this section of the story a bit confusing... You listed Maggie's mother as Rebecca at first, but at some point switched her name to Rachel. Since Jacob's sisters are named Rebecca and Rachel, it is easy to understand how this may have occurred (plus, you used Rebecca for a character earlier but it was minor - I only noticed because of my own name). ;)
7/2/2020 c1 Rebecca Rowland
I enjoyed She Speaks Fear and Truth but I LOVED the first chapter of Denver Paranormal Society!
I enjoyed She Speaks Fear and Truth but I LOVED the first chapter of Denver Paranormal Society!
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