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3/30/2015 c1 7rt80rt
Wow I like it. Is there more?
8/15/2014 c1 MissyLauren
Please update
2/11/2012 c1 HermioneandMarcus
fantastic chapter and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you
7/18/2011 c1 armybrat0987
omg gawd kewl i want more i wanna see him have his ass handed to him by his step daugter
3/17/2011 c1 shanniin
awsome, really great start :)

afew spelling mistakes tho, 'coven not covin' 'Tried not tryed'
10/31/2010 c1 5Evelyn Briar Black
This story is very interesting, please continue, but your rating should be at least T but probably M. I mean, your talking about rape and violence, that's at least T.
10/31/2010 c1 lucy smith
you have grabbed my attention fully and now im curious, go on i cant wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. although near the end of this story i want ala and edward to be friends. do you think bella could have somehow have been saved? until your next update.
10/31/2010 c1 7Gabriella.A.Marcin
Hhaha This is my story

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