for Patriot's Dawn2/18/2024 c1 
3Yuzuki476
Thank you for making this a naruto story and with itachi warning naruto and Gai helping him.
3Yuzuki476Thank you for making this a naruto story and with itachi warning naruto and Gai helping him.
2/1/2024 c2 lukeanimelover
Why wouldnt they complete the inoshikacho? It wouldve made more sense for kiba and naruto to be replaced instead. Or better yet just keep the teams cannon.
Why wouldnt they complete the inoshikacho? It wouldve made more sense for kiba and naruto to be replaced instead. Or better yet just keep the teams cannon.
1/14/2024 c3 RANDOMGAMER8742
I only have two irks for the chapter:
1. you seem to over explain a lot of things that we as readers have already picked up on based on interaction earlier in the story, or because of common sense.
2. 'elemental manipulation' or just, you know, elemental ninjutsu, is portrayed as something a lot more difficult than it is. In the main story there are thousands of ninjutsus, and the battle at the valley of the end between naruto and sasuke proves that genin know a lot of ninjutsu, as well as all the ninjutsu used by the genin chasing down sasuke beforehand, and all the ninjutsu used in the chunin exams.
other than those two the story is going pretty well and im excited to see where this goes.
I only have two irks for the chapter:
1. you seem to over explain a lot of things that we as readers have already picked up on based on interaction earlier in the story, or because of common sense.
2. 'elemental manipulation' or just, you know, elemental ninjutsu, is portrayed as something a lot more difficult than it is. In the main story there are thousands of ninjutsus, and the battle at the valley of the end between naruto and sasuke proves that genin know a lot of ninjutsu, as well as all the ninjutsu used by the genin chasing down sasuke beforehand, and all the ninjutsu used in the chunin exams.
other than those two the story is going pretty well and im excited to see where this goes.
4/4/2023 c19 mbrevig
Yep I can’t read anymore of this too much angst and stupidity from all the characters in this story.
Yep I can’t read anymore of this too much angst and stupidity from all the characters in this story.
4/4/2023 c15 mbrevig
This plot sucks Naruto is so weak and never gets stronger there is basically no difference in the outcome of this story and the show.
This plot sucks Naruto is so weak and never gets stronger there is basically no difference in the outcome of this story and the show.
4/4/2023 c2 Lilith lils
This is such a cliche tho, I feel like I’ve read something like this couple of times already
This is such a cliche tho, I feel like I’ve read something like this couple of times already