
11/2/2010 c1
1JustCallMeWhatever
This didn't really make any sense. It was a good idea, but your words were a bit scrambled and your grammar wasn't too good.
Besides that, this was a fairly cute one-shot. :)

This didn't really make any sense. It was a good idea, but your words were a bit scrambled and your grammar wasn't too good.
Besides that, this was a fairly cute one-shot. :)
11/2/2010 c1
75Shirahane Aikawa
yAY! I'm the first reviewer! I love this! and yeah you have some spelling mistake like SUKANO- It must me SAKUNO. =) but all in all i love this.. FUJISAKU! UPDATE SOON

yAY! I'm the first reviewer! I love this! and yeah you have some spelling mistake like SUKANO- It must me SAKUNO. =) but all in all i love this.. FUJISAKU! UPDATE SOON