for A Christmas Tale1/16/2011 c3 Hannelovestiva
Loved it.. short and sweet :D
Favorite part was Ziva whole speech to him in the end on why she's fallen for him: "Tony, please, just listen to me." She walked up to him and took his hand. "I am thankful that you are willing to put your life on the line for me and that you look out for me . . . and that is why you have stolen my heart." She finished and looked up at him with glassy eyes. "Tony, you are the one I have fallen for. You are the one that I love."
awwww..
Loved it.. short and sweet :D
Favorite part was Ziva whole speech to him in the end on why she's fallen for him: "Tony, please, just listen to me." She walked up to him and took his hand. "I am thankful that you are willing to put your life on the line for me and that you look out for me . . . and that is why you have stolen my heart." She finished and looked up at him with glassy eyes. "Tony, you are the one I have fallen for. You are the one that I love."
awwww..
1/16/2011 c2 Hannelovestiva
Ihhhhhh!
So adorable, he finally realized what she meant with the soul mates.. :-)
Ihhhhhh!
So adorable, he finally realized what she meant with the soul mates.. :-)
1/15/2011 c3 NCisandtivalover
Wow! Great job. :)
Wow! Great job. :)
1/15/2011 c3 
29immakingmyownluck
AW this was such a cute ending! i loved the whole story! it was fantastic! My favorite parts always seem to be the parts where ZIva is trying to tell tony and he keeps interupting her, like in this chapter, when she was trying to tell me that she loves him! :) it was very cute!
Okay,
Favorite Line, ("Tony, please, just listen to me." She walked up to him and took his hand. "I am thankful that you are willing to put your life on the line for me and that you look out for me . . . and that is why you have stolen my heart.")
Favorite Kiss, (that one woul dhave to be the miseltoe! :)
Favorite Other, (EVERYTHING!)
Great job on this ! keep it up! i love itt!
29immakingmyownluckAW this was such a cute ending! i loved the whole story! it was fantastic! My favorite parts always seem to be the parts where ZIva is trying to tell tony and he keeps interupting her, like in this chapter, when she was trying to tell me that she loves him! :) it was very cute!
Okay,
Favorite Line, ("Tony, please, just listen to me." She walked up to him and took his hand. "I am thankful that you are willing to put your life on the line for me and that you look out for me . . . and that is why you have stolen my heart.")
Favorite Kiss, (that one woul dhave to be the miseltoe! :)
Favorite Other, (EVERYTHING!)
Great job on this ! keep it up! i love itt!
12/21/2010 c2 thisaccountisnolongerinuseever
I'm back! My favorite part is "Tony, what...what are you doing?" He responded "Helping you experienced an American tradition." That was so good, i like how you mentioned the Miami guy, hmmmmm i wonder if there is going to be any other mention of him. Maybe Ziva can explain to Tony who the Miami guy is, maybe he is a boyfriend, maybe not. That would be awsome if he is, or if he is just an old friend. That would make a good story line, but I love where you are going with this so far. I could see Ziva saying she loved him back, but I also could see her hesitating and not answering then Tony would get mad and you could go from there. But then again it could go either way. I will be waiting unpatiently for trhe next chapter. Because I am your number 1 fan... Keep it up!
I'm back! My favorite part is "Tony, what...what are you doing?" He responded "Helping you experienced an American tradition." That was so good, i like how you mentioned the Miami guy, hmmmmm i wonder if there is going to be any other mention of him. Maybe Ziva can explain to Tony who the Miami guy is, maybe he is a boyfriend, maybe not. That would be awsome if he is, or if he is just an old friend. That would make a good story line, but I love where you are going with this so far. I could see Ziva saying she loved him back, but I also could see her hesitating and not answering then Tony would get mad and you could go from there. But then again it could go either way. I will be waiting unpatiently for trhe next chapter. Because I am your number 1 fan... Keep it up!
12/21/2010 c1 thisaccountisnolongerinuseever
OH,where to start...I LOVE THE MISTLE TOE IDEA. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!i'M YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN. So now im on to review the next chapter. Keep up the work...:)))))
OH,where to start...I LOVE THE MISTLE TOE IDEA. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!i'M YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN. So now im on to review the next chapter. Keep up the work...:)))))
12/19/2010 c2 Future Mrs. DiNozzo
Continue the story already!
Continue the story already!
12/19/2010 c2 2DarkAngelWings159
Eep! Hello Erin, this is your wonderful beta/long lost sister from Tumblr~ Anyway, I cannot wait until you send me the next chapter. And also, . No Snow. I've gotten enough of it. Bye, my long lost sister from another state!
2DarkAngelWings159Eep! Hello Erin, this is your wonderful beta/long lost sister from Tumblr~ Anyway, I cannot wait until you send me the next chapter. And also, . No Snow. I've gotten enough of it. Bye, my long lost sister from another state!
12/19/2010 c2 29immakingmyownluck
O hot damn! this is my jam! HHAHAHHA! yayay! omg it was so awesome! :) great job! cannt wait till moreee!
29immakingmyownluckO hot damn! this is my jam! HHAHAHHA! yayay! omg it was so awesome! :) great job! cannt wait till moreee!