10/9/2016 c10 10Fanficlover2017
This a great story and it needs to be added onto. Please update with more chapters!
This a great story and it needs to be added onto. Please update with more chapters!
12/5/2014 c3 Lewis Oliveras
I don't think it's such a good idea for Percy to bring the three people so close to him on the quest if one will die.
I don't think it's such a good idea for Percy to bring the three people so close to him on the quest if one will die.
3/27/2014 c10 Guest
Pretty short, but pretty good. I feel like you're making Aphrodite a bit too villainous. I don't expect Annabeth to argue with Percy, just yell at him then feel betrayed and sad, maybe even dumping him.
Pretty short, but pretty good. I feel like you're making Aphrodite a bit too villainous. I don't expect Annabeth to argue with Percy, just yell at him then feel betrayed and sad, maybe even dumping him.
12/25/2011 c10 Shongs1
Wow, Aphrodite sure is mean in this. Anyway this had a good plot and was a great fanfic. Great job!
Wow, Aphrodite sure is mean in this. Anyway this had a good plot and was a great fanfic. Great job!
5/15/2011 c3 Rouge Goldenwick
you know my class mate Jabahri Prescott is a seaweed brain his favorite greek god is Poseidon. The Irony
you know my class mate Jabahri Prescott is a seaweed brain his favorite greek god is Poseidon. The Irony
5/6/2011 c9 PinkPrincess4Life
YES! you mentioned me im like famous now ahahah and reading does hurt i have an issue wear i have to take pauses and look up while im reading and the doctor even said so so its a proven medical condition that i have lol haha and i am smart so who ever is reading this im probably smarter than you so dont judge me for not liking reading lol :P and i love you too haha 3 mingo-la + PinkPrincess4Life 3 haha okay well it took me a while to read it but i did hahaha it count lol :P
YES! you mentioned me im like famous now ahahah and reading does hurt i have an issue wear i have to take pauses and look up while im reading and the doctor even said so so its a proven medical condition that i have lol haha and i am smart so who ever is reading this im probably smarter than you so dont judge me for not liking reading lol :P and i love you too haha 3 mingo-la + PinkPrincess4Life 3 haha okay well it took me a while to read it but i did hahaha it count lol :P
5/6/2011 c10 PinkPrincess4Life
so i have been on this site since like 4ever i was just cheeking my email and saw that it sent me messages so i went on and so far like i only read the first sentence on the 10th chapter and why is aphrodite the traitor i love her she is my favorite god ever! okay well mingo-la you better reply to me because i know were you live haha and i go to school with you and known you since kindergarden so ya lol :P
so i have been on this site since like 4ever i was just cheeking my email and saw that it sent me messages so i went on and so far like i only read the first sentence on the 10th chapter and why is aphrodite the traitor i love her she is my favorite god ever! okay well mingo-la you better reply to me because i know were you live haha and i go to school with you and known you since kindergarden so ya lol :P
5/3/2011 c1 Danielle.daughter.of.Hermes
well at the bottom of this page there was standing something vague about reviewing and i thought why not xD?
I love your story i like your idea's :D
well at the bottom of this page there was standing something vague about reviewing and i thought why not xD?
I love your story i like your idea's :D
2/13/2011 c6 finagle29
Actually the Star Wars quote goes like this:
Darth Vader: Do you know what happened to your father?
Luke: You killed my father!
DV: No, I am your father.
L: NOOOOOOOO!
Just a minor inconsistency, but I did like the hilariousness of the situation.
Actually the Star Wars quote goes like this:
Darth Vader: Do you know what happened to your father?
Luke: You killed my father!
DV: No, I am your father.
L: NOOOOOOOO!
Just a minor inconsistency, but I did like the hilariousness of the situation.
1/9/2011 c8 annabeth 03692
NICE CHAPTER IT WAS AWSOME.but i think hades should not be so layed back about things,he should be tense.
NICE CHAPTER IT WAS AWSOME.but i think hades should not be so layed back about things,he should be tense.
1/9/2011 c4 annabeth 012369
this chapter was funny i liked it a lot.I think you should have percy and annabeth kiss in front of tyson and grover.
this chapter was funny i liked it a lot.I think you should have percy and annabeth kiss in front of tyson and grover.
1/3/2011 c8 kung fu kat
nice chapter! I loved it
nice chapter! I loved it