for Meganopoly5/18/2011 c1 Shme
I especially enjoyed this! a small mistake at the end:
"Dibs on the dog!" Minion grinned."
"Dibs on the dog!" Minion grinned.
But that's all that I noticed. Everything else was perfect! They all seem pretty well in character; however, I would have liked to read about Megamind doing something outrages such as banging his hed on the board - knocking over the annoying game pieces. :) Great one-shot!
I especially enjoyed this! a small mistake at the end:
"Dibs on the dog!" Minion grinned."
"Dibs on the dog!" Minion grinned.
But that's all that I noticed. Everything else was perfect! They all seem pretty well in character; however, I would have liked to read about Megamind doing something outrages such as banging his hed on the board - knocking over the annoying game pieces. :) Great one-shot!
3/20/2011 c1 
6Kaye Phantus
This was great. I've seen the movie 2-3 times now, and this definitly could have gone in it. Or been another short. My brother liked this to, especially the "pay up, smurf boy" part. Very in character, I can see this happening. Monppoly is also my brother's favorite board game.
This is her brother, I want to play Monopoly with them. But I'll fight MegaMind for the car.
That's my Bro for you. Anyway, awesome job!
6Kaye PhantusThis was great. I've seen the movie 2-3 times now, and this definitly could have gone in it. Or been another short. My brother liked this to, especially the "pay up, smurf boy" part. Very in character, I can see this happening. Monppoly is also my brother's favorite board game.
This is her brother, I want to play Monopoly with them. But I'll fight MegaMind for the car.
That's my Bro for you. Anyway, awesome job!
3/17/2011 c1 anon
CUTE
CUTE
2/19/2011 c1 17RemmyBlack
no, your right Roxanne, LONELY people resort to that.
This is great =) =) =) =)
17RemmyBlackno, your right Roxanne, LONELY people resort to that.
This is great =) =) =) =)
2/4/2011 c1 6Lampyridae92
God, how I love monopoly! I almost always win over my parents. Mohahahaha!
And funny story :D
6Lampyridae92God, how I love monopoly! I almost always win over my parents. Mohahahaha!
And funny story :D
1/29/2011 c1 1002572
Ahahahahaha :D that was so funny! Very well written and everyone was perfectly in character! I reakon they should have put something like that in the movie! ahahahahaha! Great job!
Ahahahahaha :D that was so funny! Very well written and everyone was perfectly in character! I reakon they should have put something like that in the movie! ahahahahaha! Great job!
1/19/2011 c1 5Fell4
So cute! I love it! I bet lonleynes IS part of the reason he kidnapped her so often!
Keep Writing,
Fell4
5Fell4So cute! I love it! I bet lonleynes IS part of the reason he kidnapped her so often!
Keep Writing,
Fell4
1/11/2011 c1 40Flowing Tears
I would play Monopoly with Megamind. I hate that game with a passion (Cause I ALWAYS lose) But I would play it with him...
40Flowing TearsI would play Monopoly with Megamind. I hate that game with a passion (Cause I ALWAYS lose) But I would play it with him...